lfs/chapter08
David Bryant f07d91ba37 Corrected idiom in section about "arpd". Corrected spelling of "front
end" -- it's twp words, not one. Changed square brackets to parentheses;
square brackets should only be used to delimit editorial remarks. Removed
one definite article referring to the plural; "the" implies a single
object. Changed "amount" to "number". In English, an amount refers to
a continuous quantity, while a number refers to discrete objects (like
networking packetts). Added a qualifier in the description of "ip":
the list of commands is not exhaustive. Modified a few program
descriptons to improve consistency of style. Changed QOS and COS
to QoS and CoS after researching these abbreviations on the internet.
"Quality of Service" and "Class of Service" appear, to me, to be the
most common way of writing these phrases.
2022-12-11 16:29:49 -06:00
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aboutdebug.xml
acl.xml Straighten out capitalization, correct a few grammatical errors, 2022-11-21 16:13:06 -06:00
attr.xml Straighten out capitalization, correct a few grammatical errors, 2022-11-21 16:13:06 -06:00
autoconf.xml New packages and an xml fix. 2022-09-29 20:44:01 -05:00
automake.xml
bash.xml Correct capitalization. Correct spellig: "test suite" is two words. 2022-12-06 11:04:37 -06:00
bc.xml Clarify the description of the -G option. 2022-11-18 13:14:57 -06:00
binutils.xml Merrriam-Webster says "alongside" is one word. Clarified some muddled 2022-11-18 15:43:45 -06:00
bison.xml
bzip2.xml
chapter08.xml
check.xml
cleanup.xml cleanup: rephrase description for .la removal 2022-09-19 14:12:17 +08:00
coreutils.xml coreutils: fix a typo 2022-12-10 14:50:10 +08:00
dbus.xml Tidy up some spacing issues 2022-11-15 00:31:18 -06:00
dejagnu.xml
diffutils.xml Improved the description of "cmp". 2022-12-10 06:58:31 -06:00
e2fsprogs.xml
eudev.xml Package updates and corrections. 2022-09-14 21:58:07 -05:00
expat.xml
expect.xml
file.xml
findutils.xml Clarified the description of what the programs in this package do. 2022-12-10 11:37:17 -06:00
flex.xml
gawk.xml Package updates. 2022-12-01 17:40:16 -06:00
gcc.xml Rewrote a cumbersome sentence to make it clearer. Capitalized the 2022-11-22 16:19:04 -06:00
gdbm.xml Fix a grammatical error (subject and verb must agree in number) and 2022-12-06 11:59:03 -06:00
gettext.xml Corrected capitalization and modified some descriptions of libraries, 2022-12-06 10:27:41 -06:00
glibc.xml glibc: Decapitalize nsswitch.conf 2022-11-18 13:25:38 +08:00
gmp.xml
gperf.xml
grep.xml Package updates and corrections. 2022-09-14 21:58:07 -05:00
groff.xml Corrected description of what the package does: groff processes both 2022-12-10 12:56:35 -06:00
grub.xml grub: HFS and HFS+ are file systems, not files 2022-12-11 16:35:41 +08:00
gzip.xml
iana-etc.xml
inetutils.xml
intltool.xml
introduction.xml chapter08: fix minor grammar issues 2022-11-18 14:29:26 +08:00
iproute2.xml Corrected idiom in section about "arpd". Corrected spelling of "front 2022-12-11 16:29:49 -06:00
jinja2.xml Tweak pip3 instructions 2022-08-09 21:44:44 -05:00
kbd.xml
kmod.xml
less.xml
libcap.xml Straighten out capitalization, correct a few grammatical errors, 2022-11-21 16:13:06 -06:00
libelf.xml Patch up English idiom here and there. 2022-12-06 14:56:58 -06:00
libffi.xml libffi: style "libffi" (library name) with XML tag 2022-12-10 14:23:40 +08:00
libpipeline.xml
libtool.xml libtool: libldtl is for dynamic loading, not dynamic linking 2022-12-09 15:35:05 +08:00
m4.xml
make.xml Package updates and a fix. 2022-11-11 09:44:13 -06:00
man-db.xml
man-pages.xml man-pages: update the number of provided pages for 6.00 2022-10-18 17:15:51 +08:00
markupsafe.xml Tweak pip3 instructions 2022-08-09 21:44:44 -05:00
meson.xml Improve English idiom. Use the indicative mood. 2022-12-09 14:27:24 -06:00
mpc.xml
mpfr.xml Straighten out capitalization, correct a few grammatical errors, 2022-11-21 16:13:06 -06:00
ncurses.xml ncurses: mention libncurses++w in contents 2022-09-14 00:15:12 +08:00
ninja.xml ninja: style "ninja" (for the program) with <command> 2022-12-09 15:40:14 +08:00
openssl.xml Fix a grammatical error (subject / verb number). Improve English idiom. 2022-12-06 14:45:38 -06:00
patch.xml
perl.xml perl: use "MAJOR.MINOR" instead of "Major.Minor", and explain "patch level" 2022-12-09 16:05:26 +08:00
pkgconfig.xml
pkgmgt.xml pkgmgt: reword the description of cfg files handling 2022-11-18 14:13:12 +08:00
procps.xml Tidy up some spacing issues 2022-11-15 00:31:18 -06:00
psmisc.xml
python.xml python: style "libffi.so" correctly 2022-12-09 15:38:15 +08:00
readline.xml Corrected a grammatical error: the subordinate clause "that offers ..." 2022-11-18 12:35:53 -06:00
sed.xml
shadow.xml Sync shadow "rounds" parameter to blfs 2022-11-25 09:30:45 +01:00
stripping.xml stripping: also mention symbol table bisides debug symbols 2022-08-21 20:27:28 +08:00
sysklogd.xml
systemd.xml systemd: fix and simply the command to disable systemd-sysupdate 2022-11-04 10:42:03 +08:00
sysvinit.xml
tar.xml Minor updates 2022-08-21 10:04:47 -05:00
tcl.xml Package updates. 2022-12-01 17:40:16 -06:00
texinfo.xml texinfo: remove unneeded sed 2022-07-02 11:31:13 +08:00
util-linux.xml Fix type (replace a / by a \ as line continue maker) 2022-11-16 08:46:22 +01:00
vim.xml vim: no need to download spell files 2022-09-12 21:02:48 +08:00
wheel.xml Corrected capitalization of the package name. This was hard to do 2022-12-08 17:23:07 -06:00
xml-parser.xml
xz.xml Intermediate update prior to lfs-11.2-rc1 2022-08-20 10:35:01 -05:00
zlib.xml
zstd.xml