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cross-ng: Grammar fixes in edition description
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the temporary packages before entering the chroot environment. The main
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the temporary packages before entering the chroot environment. The main
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purpose of this approach was to fix multiple issues found by Iterative
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purpose of this approach was to fix multiple issues found by Iterative
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Comparision Analysis. With Pierre's work, the only change needed by
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Comparision Analysis. With Pierre's work, the only change needed by
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this edition is basically <quote>to reboot instead of chroot</quote>.
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this edition is basically <quote>to reboot instead of chroot.</quote>
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However, some additional steps is needed to make the system bootable
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However, some additional steps is needed to make the system bootable
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at the end of Chapter 6, and setting up an environment suitable for
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at the end of Chapter 6, and setting up an environment suitable for
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building and test packages at the start of Chapter 7. Then this Cross
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building and test packages at the start of Chapter 7. Then this Cross
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temporary system to boot on the target machine. The temporary system
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temporary system to boot on the target machine. The temporary system
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is booted with a shell running as PID 1, and some necessary jobs of a
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is booted with a shell running as PID 1, and some necessary jobs of a
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normal <command>init</command> process are manually done with commands.
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normal <command>init</command> process are manually done with commands.
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This minimizes the difference from the main LFS book, and also helpful
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This minimizes the difference from the main LFS book, and it's also
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to learn the initialization steps booting a Linux system.</para>
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helpful for learning the initialization steps booting a Linux
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system.</para>
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</sect1>
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