From c7c614de2801cc8dedff08229e80437279dfb942 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Xi Ruoyao Date: Thu, 8 Feb 2024 12:33:29 +0800 Subject: [PATCH] cross-ng: Grammar fixes in edition description --- prologue/cross.xml | 7 ++++--- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/prologue/cross.xml b/prologue/cross.xml index 4a8208938..01a551e44 100644 --- a/prologue/cross.xml +++ b/prologue/cross.xml @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ the temporary packages before entering the chroot environment. The main purpose of this approach was to fix multiple issues found by Iterative Comparision Analysis. With Pierre's work, the only change needed by - this edition is basically to reboot instead of chroot. + this edition is basically to reboot instead of chroot. However, some additional steps is needed to make the system bootable at the end of Chapter 6, and setting up an environment suitable for building and test packages at the start of Chapter 7. Then this Cross @@ -58,8 +58,9 @@ temporary system to boot on the target machine. The temporary system is booted with a shell running as PID 1, and some necessary jobs of a normal init process are manually done with commands. - This minimizes the difference from the main LFS book, and also helpful - to learn the initialization steps booting a Linux system. + This minimizes the difference from the main LFS book, and it's also + helpful for learning the initialization steps booting a Linux + system.