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Corrected English idiom, fixed some typos in chapter 2.3 (Stages)

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@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
</sect2> </sect2>
<sect2> <sect2>
<title>Chapter&nbsp;5&ndash;6</title> <title>Chapters&nbsp;5&ndash;6</title>
<itemizedlist> <itemizedlist>
<listitem> <listitem>
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<listitem> <listitem>
<para>These two chapters <emphasis>must</emphasis> be done as user <para>These two chapters <emphasis>must</emphasis> be done as user
<systemitem class="username">lfs</systemitem>. <systemitem class="username">lfs</systemitem>.
A <command>su - lfs</command> needs to be done before any task in these A <command>su - lfs</command> comand must be issued before any task in these
chapters. Failing to do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the chapters. If you don't do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the
host, and potentially rendering it unusable.</para> host, and potentially rendering it unusable.</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
@ -54,13 +54,13 @@
are critical. If there is any are critical. If there is any
doubt about installing a package, ensure any previously expanded doubt about installing a package, ensure any previously expanded
tarballs are removed, then re-extract the package files, and complete all tarballs are removed, then re-extract the package files, and complete all
instructions in that section.</para> the instructions in that section.</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
</itemizedlist> </itemizedlist>
</sect2> </sect2>
<sect2> <sect2>
<title>Chapter&nbsp;7&ndash;10</title> <title>Chapters&nbsp;7&ndash;10</title>
<itemizedlist> <itemizedlist>
<listitem> <listitem>
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<listitem> <listitem>
<para>A few operations, from <quote>Changing Ownership</quote> to <para>A few operations, from <quote>Changing Ownership</quote> to
<quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote> must be done as the <quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote>, must be done as the
<systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user, with the LFS <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user, with the LFS
environment variable set for the &root; user.</para> environment variable set for the &root; user.</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
<listitem> <listitem>
<para> When entering chroot, the LFS environment variable must be set <para> When entering chroot, the LFS environment variable must be set
for <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>. The LFS for <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>. The LFS
variable is not used afterwards.</para> variable is not used after entering the chroot environment.</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
<listitem> <listitem>