From 925414842a22430356ca8b89393588ad05154fe9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com>
Date: Wed, 21 Sep 2022 15:53:38 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Corrected English idiom, fixed some typos in chapter 2.3
 (Stages)

---
 chapter02/stages.xml | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/chapter02/stages.xml b/chapter02/stages.xml
index 7c151975f..71f388df5 100644
--- a/chapter02/stages.xml
+++ b/chapter02/stages.xml
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
   </sect2>
 
   <sect2>
-  <title>Chapter&nbsp;5&ndash;6</title>
+  <title>Chapters&nbsp;5&ndash;6</title>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -44,8 +44,8 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>These two chapters <emphasis>must</emphasis> be done as user
         <systemitem class="username">lfs</systemitem>.
-        A <command>su - lfs</command> needs to be done before any task in these
-        chapters. Failing to do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the
+        A <command>su - lfs</command> comand must be issued before any task in these
+        chapters. If you don't do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the
         host, and potentially rendering it unusable.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -54,13 +54,13 @@
          are critical.  If there is any
          doubt about installing a package, ensure any previously expanded
          tarballs are removed, then re-extract the package files, and complete all
-         instructions in that section.</para>
+         the instructions in that section.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect2>
 
   <sect2>
-  <title>Chapter&nbsp;7&ndash;10</title>
+  <title>Chapters&nbsp;7&ndash;10</title>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
 
       <listitem>
         <para>A few operations, from <quote>Changing Ownership</quote> to
-        <quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote> must be done as the
+        <quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote>, must be done as the
         <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user, with the LFS
         environment variable set for the &root; user.</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
       <listitem>
          <para> When entering chroot, the LFS environment variable must be set
          for <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>. The LFS
-         variable is not used afterwards.</para>
+         variable is not used after entering the chroot environment.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>