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Corrected English idiom, fixed some typos in chapter 2.3 (Stages)

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David Bryant 2022-09-21 15:53:38 -05:00
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chapter02/stages.xml
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@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
</sect2>
<sect2>
<title>Chapter&nbsp;5&ndash;6</title>
<title>Chapters&nbsp;5&ndash;6</title>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
@ -44,8 +44,8 @@
<listitem>
<para>These two chapters <emphasis>must</emphasis> be done as user
<systemitem class="username">lfs</systemitem>.
A <command>su - lfs</command> needs to be done before any task in these
chapters. Failing to do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the
A <command>su - lfs</command> comand must be issued before any task in these
chapters. If you don't do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the
host, and potentially rendering it unusable.</para>
</listitem>
@ -54,13 +54,13 @@
are critical. If there is any
doubt about installing a package, ensure any previously expanded
tarballs are removed, then re-extract the package files, and complete all
instructions in that section.</para>
the instructions in that section.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</sect2>
<sect2>
<title>Chapter&nbsp;7&ndash;10</title>
<title>Chapters&nbsp;7&ndash;10</title>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>A few operations, from <quote>Changing Ownership</quote> to
<quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote> must be done as the
<quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote>, must be done as the
<systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user, with the LFS
environment variable set for the &root; user.</para>
</listitem>
@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
<listitem>
<para> When entering chroot, the LFS environment variable must be set
for <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>. The LFS
variable is not used afterwards.</para>
variable is not used after entering the chroot environment.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>