Chapter 11 text updates.

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</para>
<para>
In addition to the above, there is a set of applications that are
suitable for all systems for system management. These applications are
all in the BLFS book. Not
all packages are needed in all environments. For example
<ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/dhcpcd.html">dhcpcd</ulink>,
is not appropriate for a server and
<ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/wireless_tools.html">wireless_tools</ulink>,
are normally only
useful for a laptop system. If you are not sure if a package presented
here is needed or not, it can either be installed now or later as the
need arises.
In addition to the above, there is a set of applications for system
management for all kinds of systems. These applications are all in the
BLFS book. Not all packages are needed in every environments For
example <ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/dhcpcd.html">dhcpcd</ulink>, is
not normally appropriate for a server and <ulink
url="&blfs-book;basicnet/wireless_tools.html">wireless_tools</ulink>,
are normally only useful for a laptop system.
</para>
</sect2>
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<keycap>Alt</keycap>
<keycap>Fx</keycap>
</keycombo>
combination, where <keycap>Fx</keycap> may be <keycap>F7</keycap>.
combination, where <keycap>Fx</keycap> is usually
<keycap>F1</keycap> but may be <keycap>F7</keycap>.
</para>
</note>

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<listitem>
<para>
Finally, a review of the following configuration files
A review of the following configuration files
is also appropriate at this point.
</para>
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<screen role="nodump"><userinput>umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen>
<para>Now, reboot the system with:</para>
<para>Now, reboot the system.</para>
<screen role="nodump"><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>
<!--<screen role="nodump"><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>-->
<para>Assuming the GRUB boot loader was set up as outlined earlier, the menu
is set to boot <emphasis>LFS &version;</emphasis> automatically.</para>

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VERSION_CODENAME="&lt;your name here&gt;"
EOF</userinput></screen>
<para>Be sure to put some sort of customization for the fields
'DISTRIB_CODENAME' and 'VERSION_CODENAME' to make the system uniquely
yours.</para>
<para>Be sure to customize the fields 'DISTRIB_CODENAME' and
'VERSION_CODENAME' to make the system uniquely yours.</para>
</sect1>