diff --git a/chapter11/afterlfs.xml b/chapter11/afterlfs.xml
index 4052ccdd6..743fd2e98 100644
--- a/chapter11/afterlfs.xml
+++ b/chapter11/afterlfs.xml
@@ -52,17 +52,13 @@
- In addition to the above, there is a set of applications that are
- suitable for all systems for system management. These applications are
- all in the BLFS book. Not
- all packages are needed in all environments. For example
- dhcpcd,
- is not appropriate for a server and
- wireless_tools,
- are normally only
- useful for a laptop system. If you are not sure if a package presented
- here is needed or not, it can either be installed now or later as the
- need arises.
+ In addition to the above, there is a set of applications for system
+ management for all kinds of systems. These applications are all in the
+ BLFS book. Not all packages are needed in every environments For
+ example dhcpcd, is
+ not normally appropriate for a server and wireless_tools,
+ are normally only useful for a laptop system.
@@ -252,7 +248,8 @@ PATH=/bin:/usr/bin:/sbin:/usr/sbin /bin/bash --login'
Alt
Fx
- combination, where Fx may be F7.
+ combination, where Fx is usually
+ F1 but may be F7.
diff --git a/chapter11/reboot.xml b/chapter11/reboot.xml
index 70979a191..5eee6ca5b 100644
--- a/chapter11/reboot.xml
+++ b/chapter11/reboot.xml
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
- Finally, a review of the following configuration files
+ A review of the following configuration files
is also appropriate at this point.
@@ -122,9 +122,9 @@ umount -v $LFS
umount -v $LFS
- Now, reboot the system with:
+ Now, reboot the system.
-shutdown -r now
+
Assuming the GRUB boot loader was set up as outlined earlier, the menu
is set to boot LFS &version; automatically.
diff --git a/chapter11/theend.xml b/chapter11/theend.xml
index 8470948a3..6f5e7e401 100644
--- a/chapter11/theend.xml
+++ b/chapter11/theend.xml
@@ -60,8 +60,7 @@ PRETTY_NAME="Linux From Scratch &version;"
VERSION_CODENAME="<your name here>"
EOF
- Be sure to put some sort of customization for the fields
- 'DISTRIB_CODENAME' and 'VERSION_CODENAME' to make the system uniquely
- yours.
+ Be sure to customize the fields 'DISTRIB_CODENAME' and
+ 'VERSION_CODENAME' to make the system uniquely yours.