Chapter 11 text updates.

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</para> </para>
<para> <para>
In addition to the above, there is a set of applications that are In addition to the above, there is a set of applications for system
suitable for all systems for system management. These applications are management for all kinds of systems. These applications are all in the
all in the BLFS book. Not BLFS book. Not all packages are needed in every environments For
all packages are needed in all environments. For example example <ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/dhcpcd.html">dhcpcd</ulink>, is
<ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/dhcpcd.html">dhcpcd</ulink>, not normally appropriate for a server and <ulink
is not appropriate for a server and url="&blfs-book;basicnet/wireless_tools.html">wireless_tools</ulink>,
<ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/wireless_tools.html">wireless_tools</ulink>, are normally only useful for a laptop system.
are normally only
useful for a laptop system. If you are not sure if a package presented
here is needed or not, it can either be installed now or later as the
need arises.
</para> </para>
</sect2> </sect2>
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<keycap>Alt</keycap> <keycap>Alt</keycap>
<keycap>Fx</keycap> <keycap>Fx</keycap>
</keycombo> </keycombo>
combination, where <keycap>Fx</keycap> may be <keycap>F7</keycap>. combination, where <keycap>Fx</keycap> is usually
<keycap>F1</keycap> but may be <keycap>F7</keycap>.
</para> </para>
</note> </note>

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<listitem> <listitem>
<para> <para>
Finally, a review of the following configuration files A review of the following configuration files
is also appropriate at this point. is also appropriate at this point.
</para> </para>
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<screen role="nodump"><userinput>umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen> <screen role="nodump"><userinput>umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen>
<para>Now, reboot the system with:</para> <para>Now, reboot the system.</para>
<screen role="nodump"><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen> <!--<screen role="nodump"><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>-->
<para>Assuming the GRUB boot loader was set up as outlined earlier, the menu <para>Assuming the GRUB boot loader was set up as outlined earlier, the menu
is set to boot <emphasis>LFS &version;</emphasis> automatically.</para> is set to boot <emphasis>LFS &version;</emphasis> automatically.</para>

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VERSION_CODENAME="&lt;your name here&gt;" VERSION_CODENAME="&lt;your name here&gt;"
EOF</userinput></screen> EOF</userinput></screen>
<para>Be sure to put some sort of customization for the fields <para>Be sure to customize the fields 'DISTRIB_CODENAME' and
'DISTRIB_CODENAME' and 'VERSION_CODENAME' to make the system uniquely 'VERSION_CODENAME' to make the system uniquely yours.</para>
yours.</para>
</sect1> </sect1>