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chapter02/install.xml

@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ If a file is just tar'ed, it is unpacked by running:
 </literallayout></blockquote>
 
 <para>
-When ab archive is unpacked, a new directory will be created under the
+When an archive is unpacked, a new directory will be created under the
 current directory (and this book assumes that the archives are unpacked
 under the $LFS/usr/src directory). Please enter that new directory
 before continuing with the installation instructions. Again, every time

chapter05/installasroot.xml

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ feel it's safe to ignore that recommendation and compile as user root
 anyway. Hundreds of people using LFS have done so without any problems
 whatsoever, and we haven't encountered any bugs in the compile processes
 that cause harm. So it's pretty safe (never can be 100% safe though, so
-it's up to you what you ends up doing).
+it's up to you what you end up doing).
 </para>
 
 </sect1>

chapter06/config-glibc.xml

@@ -38,8 +38,8 @@ netgroup: db files
 
 <para>
 The <userinput>tzselect</userinput> script has to be run and the questions 
-regarding the user's timezone have to be answered.
+regarding your timezone have to be answered.
-When the user is done, the script will give the 
+When you're done, the script will give the 
 location of the needed timezone file.
 </para>
 
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ tzselect's output can be something like <emphasis>EST5EDT</emphasis> or
 </para>
 
 <para>
-The  symlink a user would create with that information would be:
+The symlink you'd create with that information would be:
 </para>
 
 <blockquote><literallayout>

chapter06/config-ldso.xml

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ libraries, so there normally isn't a need for the
 directories in which a user wants the system to search for paths. The
 <filename class="directory">/usr/local/lib</filename> directory isn't
 searched through for dynamic libraries by default, so we want to add
-this path so when a user installs software he won't be surprised by them not
+this path so when you install software you won't be surprised by them not
 running for some reason.
 </para>
 
@@ -33,9 +33,8 @@ following:
 Although it's not necessary to add the 
 <filename class="directory">/lib</filename> and 
 <filename class="directory">/usr/lib</filename> directories it doesn't 
-hurt. This way it can be seen right away what's being searched and a user
+hurt. This way it can be seen right away what's being searched and a you
-doesn't have 
+don't have to remember the default search paths if you don't want to.
-to remember the default search paths if he doesn't want to.
 </para>
 
 </sect2>

chapter06/config-shadowpwd.xml

@@ -2,10 +2,10 @@
 
 <para>
 This package contains the utilities to modify user's passwords, add new
-users/groups, delete users/groups and more. I'm not going to explain 
+users/groups, delete users/groups and more. We're not going to explain 
 what 'password shadowing' means. All about that can be read in the doc/HOWTO
 file within the unpacked shadow password suite's source tree. There's one 
-thing a user should keep in mind, if he decides to use shadow support, that 
+thing you should keep in mind, if you decide to use shadow support, that 
 programs that need to verify passwords (examples are xdm, ftp daemons, 
 pop3 daemons, etc) need to be 'shadow-compliant', eg. they need to
 be able to work with shadow'ed passwords.
@@ -18,17 +18,16 @@ shadow password suite does not enable shadow'ed passwords.
 
 <para>
 Now is a very good moment to read chapter 5 of the doc/HOWTO file. It 
-describes 
+describes how to enable shadow'ed passwords, how to test whether 
-how to enable shadow'ed passwords, how to test whether shadowing 
+shadowing works and if not, how to disable it again.
-works and if not, how to disable it again.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 The documentation mentions something about the creation of npasswd and
 nshadow after pwconv is run. This is an error in the documentation.
 Those two files will not be created. After pwconv is run, /etc/passwd
-will no longer contain the passwords and /etc/shadow will. A user doesn't
+will no longer contain the passwords and /etc/shadow will. You don't
-need to rename the npasswd and nshadow files himself.
+need to rename the npasswd and nshadow files yourself.
 </para>
 
 </sect2>

chapter06/config-vim.xml

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 <para>
 By default Vim runs in vi compatible mode. Some people might like this,
-but I have a high preference to run vim in vim mode (else I wouldn't
+but we have a high preference to run vim in vim mode (else we wouldn't
 have included Vim in this book but the original Vi). Create the
 <filename>/root/.vimrc</filename> by running the following:
 </para>

chapter06/manpages-inst.xml

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <title>Installation of Man-pages</title>
 
 <para>
-Install Man-pages by running the following commands:
+Install Man-pages by running the following command:
 </para>
 
 <blockquote><literallayout>

chapter06/perl-inst.xml

@@ -12,10 +12,10 @@ Install Perl by running the following commands:
 </literallayout></blockquote>
 
 <para>
-If a user doesn't want to answer all those questions Perl asks, he can
+If you don't want to answer all those questions Perl asks, you can
 add the -d option to the configure script and Perl will use all the
 default settings. To avoid the Configure script asking questions
-after the config.sh file has been created he can pass the -e parameter
+after the config.sh file has been created you can pass the -e parameter
 to perl as well. The commands with these parameters included will be:
 </para>
 

preface/organpart3.xml

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <title>Part III - Appendixes</title>
 
 <para>
-Part Three contains various Appendixes.
+Part Three contains various Appendices.
 </para>
 
 </sect2>