Apply a few text updates from Chris Staub. Fixes #2442.

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chapter04/abouttestsuites.xml

@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@
   number of failing tests. This may happen for several reasons, but the
   most likely cause is that the host system does not have the
   <systemitem class="filesystem">devpts</systemitem> file system set up
-  correctly. This issue is discussed in greater detail in <xref
-  linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/>.</para>
+  correctly. This issue is discussed in greater detail at
+  <ulink url="&lfs-root;/lfs/faq.html#no-ptys"/>.</para>
 
   <para>Sometimes package test suites will fail, but for reasons which the
   developers are aware of and have deemed non-critical. Consult the logs located

chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml

@@ -210,9 +210,9 @@ cd ../gcc-build</userinput></screen>
       <varlistentry>
         <term><parameter>--disable-bootstrap</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>For native builds of GCC, the default is to a "bootstrap" build.
-          This does not just compile GCC, but compiles it several times. It
-          uses the programs compiled in a first round to compile itself a
+          <para>For native builds of GCC, the default is to do a "bootstrap"
+          build. This does not just compile GCC, but compiles it several times.
+          It uses the programs compiled in a first round to compile itself a
           second time, and then again a third time.  The second and third
           iterations are compared to make sure it can reproduce itself
           flawlessly. This also implies that it was compiled correctly.

chapter05/perl.xml

@@ -43,8 +43,8 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Perl</title>
 
-    <para>First apply a series of patches to address security issues and adapt some 
-    hard-wired paths to the C library by applying the following patch:</para>
+    <para>First apply the following patch to address security issues and adapt
+    some hard-wired paths to the C library:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">patch -Np1 -i ../&perl-consolidated-patch;</userinput></screen>
 

chapter06/bison.xml

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 
 <screen><userinput remap="configure">./configure --prefix=/usr</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>The configure system causes bison to be built without support for
+    <para>The configure system causes Bison to be built without support for
     internationalization of error messages if a <command>bison</command>
     program is not already in $PATH. The following addition will correct
     this:</para>

chapter06/sysvinit.xml

@@ -55,9 +55,9 @@
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i 's@Sending processes@&amp; configured via /etc/inittab@g' \
     src/init.c</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>A maintained version of the <command>wall</command> program is
-    installed later on during the Util-linux-ng installation. Suppress the
-    installation of this program and its man page:</para>
+    <para>A maintained version of the <command>wall</command> program was
+    installed earlier by Util-linux-ng. Suppress the installation of Sysvinit's
+    version of this program and its man page:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="make">sed -i -e 's/utmpdump wall/utmpdump/' \
        -e 's/mountpoint.1 wall.1/mountpoint.1/' src/Makefile</userinput></screen>

chapter06/vim.xml

@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
           character encodings. This is needed if using a locale with a
           multibyte character set. This switch is also helpful to be able
           to edit text files initially created in Linux distributions like
-          Fedora Core that use UTF-8 as a default character set.</para>
+          Fedora that use UTF-8 as a default character set.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>