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prologue/hostreqs.xml
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<para>The host must be running at least a 2.6.2 kernel compiled with GCC-3.0 or
higher. There are two main reasons for this requirement. First, the Native POSIX
Threading Library (NPTL) test suite will segfault if the host's kernel has not
been compiled with GCC-3.0 or a later version. Secondly, the 2.6.2 or later
been compiled with GCC-3.0 or a later version. Second, the 2.6.2 or later
version of the kernel is required for the use of Udev. Udev creates devices
dynamically by reading from the <systemitem
class="filesystem">sysfs</systemitem> file system. However, support for this
@ -35,8 +35,8 @@ package. If so, you may wish to install it. If your vendor doesn't offer a 2.6.2
(or later) kernel package, or you would prefer not to install it, then you can
compile a 2.6 kernel yourself. Instructions for compiling the kernel and
configuring the boot loader (assuming the host uses GRUB) are located in <xref
linkend="chapter-bootable"/>. This second option can also been seen as a gauge
of your current Linux skills. If this second requirement is too steep then the
linkend="chapter-bootable"/>. This second option can also be seen as a gauge
of your current Linux skills. If this second requirement is too steep, then the
LFS book will not likely be much use to you at this time.</para>
</sect1>

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prologue/typography.xml
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@ -28,13 +28,13 @@ to show filenames, such as
<para><emphasis>Emphasis</emphasis></para>
<para>This form of text is used for several purposes in the book,
mainly to emphasize important points or items.</para>
<para>This form of text is used for several purposes in the book. Its main
purpose is to emphasize important points or items.</para>
<para><ulink url="&lfs-root;"/></para>
<para>This format is used for hyperlinks, both within the LFS
community and to external pages, including HOWTOs, download locations,
<para>This format is used for hyperlinks both within the LFS
community and to external pages. It includes HOWTOs, download locations,
and websites.</para>
<screen><userinput>cat &gt; $LFS/etc/group &lt;&lt; "EOF"
@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Therefore, this entire section is generally typed as seen.</para>
<para><replaceable>[REPLACED TEXT]</replaceable></para>
<para>This format is used to encapsulate text that is not to be typed
as seen or copy-and-pasted.</para>
as seen or copied-and-pasted.</para>
<para><filename>passwd(5)</filename></para>