Several typos and grammar fixes (sash)

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6464 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
This commit is contained in:
Matthew Burgess 2005-07-09 16:25:02 +00:00
parent 0ba4e25770
commit fc885c111a
2 changed files with 8 additions and 8 deletions

View File

@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
<para>The host must be running at least a 2.6.2 kernel compiled with GCC-3.0 or <para>The host must be running at least a 2.6.2 kernel compiled with GCC-3.0 or
higher. There are two main reasons for this requirement. First, the Native POSIX higher. There are two main reasons for this requirement. First, the Native POSIX
Threading Library (NPTL) test suite will segfault if the host's kernel has not Threading Library (NPTL) test suite will segfault if the host's kernel has not
been compiled with GCC-3.0 or a later version. Secondly, the 2.6.2 or later been compiled with GCC-3.0 or a later version. Second, the 2.6.2 or later
version of the kernel is required for the use of Udev. Udev creates devices version of the kernel is required for the use of Udev. Udev creates devices
dynamically by reading from the <systemitem dynamically by reading from the <systemitem
class="filesystem">sysfs</systemitem> file system. However, support for this class="filesystem">sysfs</systemitem> file system. However, support for this
@ -35,8 +35,8 @@ package. If so, you may wish to install it. If your vendor doesn't offer a 2.6.2
(or later) kernel package, or you would prefer not to install it, then you can (or later) kernel package, or you would prefer not to install it, then you can
compile a 2.6 kernel yourself. Instructions for compiling the kernel and compile a 2.6 kernel yourself. Instructions for compiling the kernel and
configuring the boot loader (assuming the host uses GRUB) are located in <xref configuring the boot loader (assuming the host uses GRUB) are located in <xref
linkend="chapter-bootable"/>. This second option can also been seen as a gauge linkend="chapter-bootable"/>. This second option can also be seen as a gauge
of your current Linux skills. If this second requirement is too steep then the of your current Linux skills. If this second requirement is too steep, then the
LFS book will not likely be much use to you at this time.</para> LFS book will not likely be much use to you at this time.</para>
</sect1> </sect1>

View File

@ -28,13 +28,13 @@ to show filenames, such as
<para><emphasis>Emphasis</emphasis></para> <para><emphasis>Emphasis</emphasis></para>
<para>This form of text is used for several purposes in the book, <para>This form of text is used for several purposes in the book. Its main
mainly to emphasize important points or items.</para> purpose is to emphasize important points or items.</para>
<para><ulink url="&lfs-root;"/></para> <para><ulink url="&lfs-root;"/></para>
<para>This format is used for hyperlinks, both within the LFS <para>This format is used for hyperlinks both within the LFS
community and to external pages, including HOWTOs, download locations, community and to external pages. It includes HOWTOs, download locations,
and websites.</para> and websites.</para>
<screen><userinput>cat &gt; $LFS/etc/group &lt;&lt; "EOF" <screen><userinput>cat &gt; $LFS/etc/group &lt;&lt; "EOF"
@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Therefore, this entire section is generally typed as seen.</para>
<para><replaceable>[REPLACED TEXT]</replaceable></para> <para><replaceable>[REPLACED TEXT]</replaceable></para>
<para>This format is used to encapsulate text that is not to be typed <para>This format is used to encapsulate text that is not to be typed
as seen or copy-and-pasted.</para> as seen or copied-and-pasted.</para>
<para><filename>passwd(5)</filename></para> <para><filename>passwd(5)</filename></para>