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chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -46,6 +46,10 @@
           <para>[Chris] - Corrected the home page for Patch.
           Fixes <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;3621">#3621</ulink>.</para>
         </listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[Chris] - Various text updates.
+          Fixes <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;3622">#3622</ulink>.</para>
+        </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
 

chapter03/introduction.xml

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>wget -i wget-list -P $LFS/sources</userinput></screen>
 
   <para>Additionally, starting with LFS-7.0, there is a separate file,
-  <ulink url="../md5sums">md5sums</ulink>, can be used to verify that all
+  <ulink url="../md5sums">md5sums</ulink>, which can be used to verify that all
   the correct packages are available before proceeding.  Place that file in
   <filename class="directory">$LFS/sources</filename> and run:</para>
 

chapter05/perl.xml

@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
     <para>Although Perl comes with a test suite, it would be better to wait
     until it is installed in the next chapter.</para>
 
-    <para>Only a few of the utilities and libraries, need to be installed at this
+    <para>Only a few of the utilities and libraries need to be installed at this
     time:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">cp -v perl cpan/podlators/pod2man /tools/bin

chapter06/automake.xml

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
     <para>There are a couple of tests that incorrectly link to the 
     wrong version of the flex library, so we temporarily work around
     the problem.  Also, using the -j4 make option speeds up the tests, even on
-    systems with only one processor due to internal delays in individual
+    systems with only one processor, due to internal delays in individual
     tests.  To test the results, issue:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="test">sed -i "s:./configure:LEXLIB=/usr/lib/libfl.a &amp;:" t/lex-{clean,depend}-cxx.sh

chapter06/binutils.xml

@@ -64,8 +64,8 @@ Ask your system administrator to create more.</computeroutput></screen>
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">rm -fv etc/standards.info
 sed -i.bak '/^INFO/s/standards.info //' etc/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Add an upstream patch to use gcc's link time optimization (LTO) 
+    <para>Add an upstream patch to use GCC's link time optimization (LTO) 
-    the default:</para>
+    by default:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">patch -Np1 -i ../&binutils-lto-patch;</userinput></screen>
 

chapter06/flex.xml

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Flex</title>
 
-    <para>First, skip running three regression tests that require bison.</para>
+    <para>First, skip running three regression tests that require Bison:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i -e '/test-bison/d' tests/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
 

chapter06/inetutils.xml

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
     <title>Installation of Inetutils</title>
 
     <para>Create a definition to allow the <command>ifconfig</command> program
-    to build properly.</para>
+    to build properly:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">echo '#define PATH_PROCNET_DEV "/proc/net/dev"' &gt;&gt; ifconfig/system/linux.h </userinput></screen>
 

chapter06/kmod.xml

@@ -78,10 +78,9 @@
 
 <screen><userinput remap="test">make check</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Install the package, man pages, and create symlinks for
+    <para>Install the package and man pages, and create symlinks for
     compatibility with Module-Init-Tools (the package that previously handled
-    Linux kernel modules).  Also make sure that all libraries are in the
+    Linux kernel modules):</para>
-    correct directory: </para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">make install
 

chapter06/man-pages.xml

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
   <sect2 role="package">
     <title/>
 
-    <para>The Man-pages package contains over 1,900 man pages.</para>
+    <para>The Man-pages package contains over 2,200 man pages.</para>
 
     <segmentedlist>
       <segtitle>&buildtime;</segtitle>

chapter07/bootscripts.xml

@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@
         <term><command>udev_retry</command></term>
         <listitem>
           <para>Retries failed udev uevents, and copies generated rules
-          files from to
+          files from <filename class="directory">/run/udev</filename> to
           <filename class="directory">/etc/udev/rules.d</filename> if required</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts udev-retry-bootscripts">
             <primary sortas="d-udev-retry">udev_retry</primary>

chapter08/kernel.xml

@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ Device Drivers  --->
           <para>This will create automated device nodes which are populated by the
           kernel, even without udev running.  Udev then runs on top of this,
           managing permissions and adding symlinks.  This configuration
-          itme is required for all users of udev/eudev. </para>
+          item is required for all users of Udev/Eudev.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
 
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ Device Drivers  ---&gt;
     located in <xref linkend="ch-scripts-udev"/> and in the kernel
     documentation in the <filename
     class="directory">linux-&linux-version;/Documentation</filename> directory.
-    Also, <filename>modprobe.conf(5)</filename> may be of interest.</para>
+    Also, <filename>modprobe.d(5)</filename> may be of interest.</para>
 
     <para>Install the modules, if the kernel configuration uses them:</para>