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chapter01/changelog.xml
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<para>[Chris] - Corrected the home page for Patch.
Fixes <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;3621">#3621</ulink>.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>[Chris] - Various text updates.
Fixes <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;3622">#3622</ulink>.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</listitem>

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chapter03/introduction.xml
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<screen role="nodump"><userinput>wget -i wget-list -P $LFS/sources</userinput></screen>
<para>Additionally, starting with LFS-7.0, there is a separate file,
<ulink url="../md5sums">md5sums</ulink>, can be used to verify that all
<ulink url="../md5sums">md5sums</ulink>, which can be used to verify that all
the correct packages are available before proceeding. Place that file in
<filename class="directory">$LFS/sources</filename> and run:</para>

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<para>Although Perl comes with a test suite, it would be better to wait
until it is installed in the next chapter.</para>
<para>Only a few of the utilities and libraries, need to be installed at this
<para>Only a few of the utilities and libraries need to be installed at this
time:</para>
<screen><userinput remap="install">cp -v perl cpan/podlators/pod2man /tools/bin

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<para>There are a couple of tests that incorrectly link to the
wrong version of the flex library, so we temporarily work around
the problem. Also, using the -j4 make option speeds up the tests, even on
systems with only one processor due to internal delays in individual
systems with only one processor, due to internal delays in individual
tests. To test the results, issue:</para>
<screen><userinput remap="test">sed -i "s:./configure:LEXLIB=/usr/lib/libfl.a &amp;:" t/lex-{clean,depend}-cxx.sh

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<screen><userinput remap="pre">rm -fv etc/standards.info
sed -i.bak '/^INFO/s/standards.info //' etc/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
<para>Add an upstream patch to use gcc's link time optimization (LTO)
the default:</para>
<para>Add an upstream patch to use GCC's link time optimization (LTO)
by default:</para>
<screen><userinput remap="pre">patch -Np1 -i ../&binutils-lto-patch;</userinput></screen>

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<sect2 role="installation">
<title>Installation of Flex</title>
<para>First, skip running three regression tests that require bison.</para>
<para>First, skip running three regression tests that require Bison:</para>
<screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i -e '/test-bison/d' tests/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>

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<title>Installation of Inetutils</title>
<para>Create a definition to allow the <command>ifconfig</command> program
to build properly.</para>
to build properly:</para>
<screen><userinput remap="pre">echo '#define PATH_PROCNET_DEV "/proc/net/dev"' &gt;&gt; ifconfig/system/linux.h </userinput></screen>

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chapter06/kmod.xml
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<screen><userinput remap="test">make check</userinput></screen>
<para>Install the package, man pages, and create symlinks for
<para>Install the package and man pages, and create symlinks for
compatibility with Module-Init-Tools (the package that previously handled
Linux kernel modules). Also make sure that all libraries are in the
correct directory: </para>
Linux kernel modules):</para>
<screen><userinput remap="install">make install

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<sect2 role="package">
<title/>
<para>The Man-pages package contains over 1,900 man pages.</para>
<para>The Man-pages package contains over 2,200 man pages.</para>
<segmentedlist>
<segtitle>&buildtime;</segtitle>

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<term><command>udev_retry</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>Retries failed udev uevents, and copies generated rules
files from to
files from <filename class="directory">/run/udev</filename> to
<filename class="directory">/etc/udev/rules.d</filename> if required</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts udev-retry-bootscripts">
<primary sortas="d-udev-retry">udev_retry</primary>

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<para>This will create automated device nodes which are populated by the
kernel, even without udev running. Udev then runs on top of this,
managing permissions and adding symlinks. This configuration
itme is required for all users of udev/eudev. </para>
item is required for all users of Udev/Eudev.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
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located in <xref linkend="ch-scripts-udev"/> and in the kernel
documentation in the <filename
class="directory">linux-&linux-version;/Documentation</filename> directory.
Also, <filename>modprobe.conf(5)</filename> may be of interest.</para>
Also, <filename>modprobe.d(5)</filename> may be of interest.</para>
<para>Install the modules, if the kernel configuration uses them:</para>