diff --git a/chapter02/hostreqs.xml b/chapter02/hostreqs.xml
index 0d765085b..852d1a07f 100644
--- a/chapter02/hostreqs.xml
+++ b/chapter02/hostreqs.xml
@@ -300,10 +300,10 @@ bash version-check.sh
- If the kernel feature required by a multilib is not enabled,
- building the multilib for a package in Chapter 8 may either fail
- immediately, or cause hidden breakages because autoconf cannot
- probe the system features properly.
+ If the kernel feature required for a multilib architecture is not
+ enabled, building the multilib architecture for a package in
+ Chapter 8 may either fail immediately, or cause hidden breakages
+ because autoconf cannot probe the system features properly.
diff --git a/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml b/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml
index e72f29eb1..cbd3456b4 100644
--- a/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml
+++ b/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ cd build
--enable-multilib --with-multilib-list=...
- LFS canbe used to support multilib. Which they are is
+ LFS can be used to support multilib. Which they are is
specified in the multilib list.
diff --git a/prologue/multilib.xml b/prologue/multilib.xml
index b4bf7975d..8006ca7f8 100644
--- a/prologue/multilib.xml
+++ b/prologue/multilib.xml
@@ -66,8 +66,8 @@
approach of LFS which is to show you how to build a Linux system.
To achieve this, no support for additional architectures than
the default one for your system is required. If you haven't
- previously built by the standard LFS book, you are encouraged to
- do so before using this edition.
+ previously built a system using the standard LFS book, you are
+ encouraged to do so before using this edition.
@@ -75,11 +75,12 @@
Building a multilib system is not that much different from
building a system by using the 'native' LFS book. Beside some
- tweaks here and there the most prominent difference is that
- multilib requires compiling some applications up to three times:
+ tweaks here and there the most prominent difference is that a
+ multilib system requires compiling some applications up to three
+ times:
one for the primary 64-bit architecture,
one for the 32-bit architecture (m32),
- and once again for the 32-bit architecture with is 32-bit memory
+ and once again for the 32-bit architecture with its 32-bit memory
access and 64 bit instruction set (mx32).
Continue only if you and your system meets the following
@@ -92,7 +93,7 @@
you will need to have
CONFIG_IA32_EMULATION=y
set in order to build for m32 and
- CONFIG_X86_X32=y set in order to
+ CONFIG_X86_X32_ABI=y set in order to
build for mx32.