diff --git a/chapter08/pkgconf.xml b/chapter08/pkgconf.xml
index 8c1031b14..7a9569178 100644
--- a/chapter08/pkgconf.xml
+++ b/chapter08/pkgconf.xml
@@ -44,10 +44,11 @@
 
     <title>Installation of Pkgconf</title>
 
-    <para>Pkgconf 2.0.0 explicitly errors when attempting to run
-           --modversion with multiple packages. This breaks many
-           packages in BLFS. Run this sed to reinstate the old 
-           output for pkgconf.</para>
+    <para>Pkgconf-2.0.0 explicitly errors when attempting to run
+    <option>--modversion</option> with multiple arguments, even if these
+    arguments are constraints for the same package.  This breaks many
+    packages in BLFS. Run this sed to reinstate the old
+    output for pkgconf:</para>
 
      <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i '/1330,1336/s|^|//|' cli/main.c</userinput></screen>