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More chapter 7 typo and markup fixes

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Matthew Burgess 2005-06-16 20:09:36 +00:00
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chapter01/changelog.xml
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@ -88,6 +88,9 @@ First a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
</itemizedlist>
</listitem>
<listitem><para>June 16th, 2005 [matthew]: Another round of typo and markup
fixes in chapter 7, as reported by Randy McMurchy.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>June 16th, 2005 [matthew]: Typo and markup fixes in
chapter 7, as reported by Randy McMurchy.</para></listitem>

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chapter07/bootscripts.xml
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@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ daemons</para>
<varlistentry id="udev-bootscripts">
<term><command>udev</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>Sets up udev and create the devices nodes in <filename
<para>Sets up udev and create the device nodes in <filename
class="directory">/dev</filename></para>
<indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts udev-bootscripts"><primary sortas="d-udev">udev</primary></indexterm>
</listitem>

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chapter07/hosts.xml
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@ -17,13 +17,13 @@
<primary sortas="d-network">network</primary>
<secondary>/etc/hosts</secondary></indexterm>
<para>If a network card is to be configured, decide on the IP-address,
<para>If a network card is to be configured, decide on the IP address,
FQDN, and possible aliases for use in the
<filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file. The syntax is:</para>
<screen>&lt;IP address&gt; myhost.example.org aliases</screen>
<para>Unless the computer is to be visible to the Internet (e.g.,
<para>Unless the computer is to be visible to the Internet (i.e.,
there is a registered domain and a valid block of assigned IP
addresses&mdash;most users do not have this), make sure that the IP
address is in the private network IP address range. Valid ranges
@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ are:</para>
<screen> Class Networks
A 10.0.0.0
B 172.16.0.0 through 172.31.0.0
C 192.168.0.0 through 192.168.255.0</screen>
B 172.16.0.0 through 172.31.0.255
C 192.168.0.0 through 192.168.255.255</screen>
<para>A valid IP address could be 192.168.1.1. A valid FQDN for this
IP could be www.linuxfromscratch.org (not recommended because this is

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chapter07/udev.xml
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@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ and make this device available by creating the device node(s) for it.</para>
<title>Problems with Creating Devices</title>
<para>There are a few known problems when it comes to automatically creating
devices nodes:</para>
device nodes:</para>
<para>1) A kernel driver may not export its data to <systemitem
class="filesystem">sysfs</systemitem>.</para>