Edited for style, idiom, and punctuation. Emphasized the need to continue

applying security patches even after LFS is "complete".
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<para>The software used to create an LFS system is constantly being updated
and enhanced. Security warnings and bug fixes may become available after
the LFS book has been released. To check whether the package versions or
instructions in this release of LFS need any modifications to accommodate
security vulnerabilities or other bug fixes, please visit
instructions in this release of LFS need any modifications&mdash;to repair
security vulnerabilities or to fix other bugs&mdash;please visit
<ulink url="&errata;"/>
before proceeding with your build. You should note any
changes shown and apply them to the relevant section of the book as you
progress with building the LFS system.</para>
changes shown and apply them to the relevant sections of the book as you
build the LFS system.</para>
<para>In addition, the Linux From Scratch editors maintain a list of security
vulnerabilities discovered after a book was released. To check whether there
are any active security vulnerabilities, please visit
<ulink url="&secadv;"/> prior to proceeding with your build. You should note
any advisories and perform the steps to fix any security vulnerabilities as
you progress with building the LFS system.</para>
vulnerabilities discovered <emphasis>after</emphasis> a book has been released. To see
whether there are any known security vulnerabilities, please visit
<ulink url="&secadv;"/> before proceeding with your build. You should also continue
to consult the advisories, and fix any security vulnerabilities, even
when the LFS system has been completely constructed.</para>
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