diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml
index a0707f9f2..52230ee04 100644
--- a/chapter01/changelog.xml
+++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml
@@ -84,6 +84,9 @@ First a summary, then a detailed log.
+May 23nd, 2005 [manuel]: Minor wording improvements (thanks to
+Peter Ennis)
+
May 22nd, 2005 [matt]: Updated to Linux-2.6.11.10.
May 15th, 2005 [matt]: Added gzip security patch.
diff --git a/general.ent b/general.ent
index 2ba2da6a4..47ec19f01 100644
--- a/general.ent
+++ b/general.ent
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-
-
+
+
diff --git a/prologue/audience.xml b/prologue/audience.xml
index b9a1842a1..06da55eed 100644
--- a/prologue/audience.xml
+++ b/prologue/audience.xml
@@ -31,10 +31,10 @@ and how programs are installed.
Another benefit of LFS is the ability to create a very compact
Linux system. When installing a regular distribution, one is often
-forced to install several programs which are probably never used.
+forced to include several programs which are probably never used.
These programs waste precious disk space, or worse, CPU cycles. It is
not difficult to build an LFS system of less than 100 megabytes (MB),
-which is substantially smaller compared to most existing setups. Does
+which is substantially smaller when compared to the majority of existing installations. Does
this still sound like a lot of space? A few of us have been working on
creating a very small embedded LFS system. We successfully built a
system that was specialized to run the Apache web server with
diff --git a/prologue/prerequisites.xml b/prologue/prerequisites.xml
index 506fe4487..8c4d65e93 100644
--- a/prologue/prerequisites.xml
+++ b/prologue/prerequisites.xml
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ recommend reading the following HOWTOs:
generic
Unix software distributions under Linux.
The Linux Users' Guide
-
+
This guide covers the usage of assorted Linux software.