clfs-ng: Fix some grammar errors

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Xi Ruoyao 2023-11-22 04:16:37 +08:00
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@ -38,8 +38,8 @@ readonly IGNOREEOF=1000</userinput></screen>
bash: no job control in this shell</computeroutput></screen> bash: no job control in this shell</computeroutput></screen>
<para>This is normal because the shell is not assigned with a <para>This is normal because the shell is not assigned with a
controlling terminal yet. Now set up controlling terminal and controlling terminal yet. Now set up the controlling terminal and
environment variables:</para> some environment variables:</para>
<screen><userinput>exec setsid -c /usr/bin/env -i \ <screen><userinput>exec setsid -c /usr/bin/env -i \
HOME=/root \ HOME=/root \
@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ bash: no job control in this shell</computeroutput></screen>
TESTSUITEFLAGS="-j<replaceable>$(nproc)</replaceable>" \ TESTSUITEFLAGS="-j<replaceable>$(nproc)</replaceable>" \
/bin/bash --login</userinput></screen> /bin/bash --login</userinput></screen>
<para>The command replace the current shell process with a new shell <para>The command replaces the current shell process with a new shell
process, with controlling terminal set up.</para> process, with controlling terminal set up.</para>
<para> <para>

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@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
<para>All commands in this and following chapters are run as &root; on the <para>All commands in this and following chapters are run as &root; on the
target system, fortunately without access to the host system. target system, fortunately without access to the host system.
Be careful anyway, as if the storage devices of your target system already Be careful anyway, as if the storage devices of your target system already
contain some important data, it's possible to destroy them with bad contains some important data, it's possible to destroy them with bad
commands.</para> commands.</para>
</sect1> </sect1>

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@ -72,8 +72,9 @@ mount -vt tmpfs tmpfs /dev/shm -o nosuid,nodev</userinput></screen>
<sect2 id="ch-tools-devadjust"> <sect2 id="ch-tools-devadjust">
<title>Adjusting devtmpfs</title> <title>Adjusting devtmpfs</title>
<para>Now <systemitem class='filesystem'>proc</systemitem> filesystem <para>Now with the
is mounted, we can replace the device nodes for standard I/O streams <systemitem class='filesystem'>proc</systemitem> filesystem
mounted, we can replace the device nodes for standard I/O streams
with symlinks to pseudo files in with symlinks to pseudo files in
<filename class="directory">/proc/self/fd</filename> (which are symlinks <filename class="directory">/proc/self/fd</filename> (which are symlinks
to the files connected to the standard I/O streams for the current to the files connected to the standard I/O streams for the current