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Edited Pierre's recent additons,to improve English idiom. Also corrected

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chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml
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<sect1 id="ch-tools-creatingminlayout">
<?dbhtml filename="creatingminlayout.html"?>
<title>Creating a limited directory layout in LFS filesystem</title>
<title>Creating a Limited Directory Layout in the LFS Filesystem</title>
<para>In this section, we begin populating the LFS filesystem with the
pieces that will constitute the final Linux system. The first step is to
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<note>
<para>
LFS editors have deliberately decided not to use a
The LFS editors have deliberately decided not to use a
<filename class="directory">/usr/lib64</filename> directory. Several
steps are taken so that the toolchain does not use it. If for any
steps are taken to be sure the toolchain will not use it. If for any
reason this directory appears (either because you made an error in
following the instructions, or because you install a binary package that
creates it after finishing LFS), it may break the instructions given in
the book. You should often ensure that this directory is non-existent.
following the instructions, or because you installed a binary package that
created it after finishing LFS), it may break your system.
You should always be sure this directory does not exist.
</para>
</note>

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<warning>
<para>
The FHS does not enforce the existence of the directory
The FHS does not mandate the existence of the directory
<filename class="directory">/usr/lib64</filename>, and the LFS editors
have decided not to use it. For the instructions in LFS and BLFS to work,
it is imperative that this directory be non-existent. You should often
check that it does not exist, because it is easy to inadvertently
create it, which will likely break your system.
have decided not to use it. For the instructions in LFS and BLFS to work correctly,
it is imperative that this directory be non-existent. From time to time you should
verify that it does not exist, because it is easy to create it
inadvertently, and this will probably break your system.
</para>
</warning>