Add additional explanations for time zone

installation, udev, and network configuration.


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chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -36,6 +36,16 @@
     </listitem>
 
 -->
+    <listitem>
+      <para>2012-08-29</para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[bdubbs] - Add additional explanations for time zone 
+          installation, udev, and network configuration.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
+    </listitem>
+
     <listitem>
       <para>2012-08-27</para>
       <itemizedlist>

chapter06/glibc.xml

@@ -377,7 +377,9 @@ zic -d /usr/share/zoneinfo -p America/New_York</userinput></screen>
       <varlistentry>
         <term><parameter>zic ... -p ...</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This creates the <filename>posixrules</filename> file.</para>
+          <para>This creates the <filename>posixrules</filename> file. We use
+          New York because POSIX requites the daylight savings time rules
+          to be unaccordance with US rules,</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
     </variablelist>

chapter06/systemd.xml

@@ -42,8 +42,14 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Udev</title>
 
+    <note><para>This package is a little different from other packages.  The
+    initial package that is extracted is
+    <filename>systemd-&systemd-version;.tar.xz</filename> even though the 
+    application we are installing is udev. After changing to the 
+    systemd directory, follow the instructions below.</para></note>
+
     <para>The udev-lfs tarball contains LFS-specific files used to build
-    Udev. Unpack it into the Udev source directory:</para>
+    Udev. Unpack it into the systemd source directory:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">tar -xvf ../&udev-lfs;.tar.bz2</userinput></screen>
 

chapter07/network.xml

@@ -17,11 +17,12 @@
   <para>This section only applies if a network card is to be
   configured.</para>
 
-  <para>If a network card will not be used, there is likely no need to
+  <para>If a network card will not be used, there is likely no need to create
-  create any configuration files relating to network cards. If that is
+  any configuration files relating to network cards. If that is the case, you
-  the case, remove the <filename class="symlink">network</filename>
+  will need to remove the <filename class="symlink">network</filename> symlinks
-  symlinks from all run-level directories (<filename
+  from all run-level directories (<filename
-  class="directory">/etc/rc.d/rc*.d</filename>).</para>
+  class="directory">/etc/rc.d/rc*.d</filename>) after the bootscripts are
+  installed in <xref linkend="ch-scripts-bootscripts"/>.</para>
 
   <sect2 id='stable-net-names'>
     <title>Creating stable names for network interfaces</title>

general.ent

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-<!ENTITY version "SVN-20120827">
+<!ENTITY version "SVN-20120829">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "August 27, 2012">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "August 29, 2012">
 <!ENTITY copyrightdate "1999-2012"><!-- jhalfs needs a literal dash, not &ndash; -->
 <!ENTITY milestone "7.2">
 <!ENTITY generic-version "development"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or "x.y[-pre{x}]" -->