Minor editorial changes

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@10374 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

chapter05/glibc.xml

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
     and install if they are not:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">if [ ! -r /usr/include/rpc/types.h ]; then
-  su -c 'mkdir -p /usr/include/rpc'
+  su -c 'mkdir -pv /usr/include/rpc'
   su -c 'cp -v sunrpc/rpc/*.h /usr/include/rpc'
 fi</userinput></screen>
 

chapter06/groff.xml

@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
 
     <para>Install the package:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput remap="install">mkdir -p /usr/share/doc/groff-1.22/pdf
+<screen><userinput remap="install">mkdir -pv /usr/share/doc/groff-1.22/pdf
 make install</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Some documentation programs, such as <command>xman</command>,

chapter06/kernfs.xml

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
     <para>Begin by creating directories onto which the file systems will be
     mounted:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput>mkdir -v $LFS/{dev,proc,sys}</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput>mkdir -pv $LFS/{dev,proc,sys}</userinput></screen>
 
   <sect2>
     <title>Creating Initial Device Nodes</title>
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ mount -vt sysfs sysfs $LFS/sys</userinput></screen>
 
 <screen><userinput>if [ -h $LFS/dev/shm ]; then
   link=$(readlink $LFS/dev/shm)
-  mkdir -p $LFS/$link
+  mkdir -pv $LFS/$link
   mount -vt tmpfs shm $LFS/$link
   unset link
 else

prologue/hostreqs.xml

@@ -141,7 +141,11 @@
   deviation from the instructions or additional patches to some
   packages.</para>
 
-  <para id="version-check">To see whether your host system has all the appropriate versions, and
+  <!-- Use an empty sect2 element to prevent a pdf warning.  -->
+  <sect2 id="version-check">
+  <title> </title>
+
+  <para >To see whether your host system has all the appropriate versions, and
   the ability to compile programs, run the following:</para>
 
 <!-- ANY additional lines in the script cause a pdf rendering problem-->
@@ -191,4 +195,5 @@ EOF
 
 bash version-check.sh</userinput></screen>
 
+</sect2>
 </sect1>