Some more adjustments.

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chapter04/chapter04.xml

@@ -17,26 +17,29 @@ reason for not using the latest version due to known problems that haven't
 been worked around yet.</para>
 
 <para>All the URLs, when possible, refer to the project's page at
-<ulink url="http://www.freshmeat.net"/>. The Freshmeat
+<ulink url="http://www.freshmeat.net/"/>. The Freshmeat
 pages will give you easy access to the official download sites as well as
 project websites, mailinglists, FAQs, Changelogs and more.</para>
 
 <para>We can't guarantee that these download locations are always available
 to you. In case a download location has changed since this book was
 published, please try to google for the package. Should you remain
-unsuccessful with this you should consult the book's errata page at
-<ulink url="http://linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/print"/> or try
-the alternative means of download listed at 
+unsuccessful with this, you can consult the book's errata page at
+<ulink url="http://linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/print/"/> or try
+the alternative means of downloading given at 
 <ulink url="http://linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/packages.html"/></para>
 
 <para>You'll need to store all the downloaded packages and patches somewhere
 that is conveniently available throughout the entire build. You'll also need a
 working directory in which to unpack the sources and build them. A scheme that
-works well is to use $LFS/tools/src/packages for all the downloaded files and
-$LFS/tools/src for the working directory. In this way, everything will be on the
-LFS partition and always available. Normally, you should delete the source and
-build directories after each package installation, unless instructed to do
-otherwise.</para>
+works well is to use <filename>$LFS/tools/src/packages</filename> for all the
+downloaded files and <filename>$LFS/tools/src</filename> for the working
+directory. In this way, everything will be on the LFS partition and always
+available.</para>
+ 
+<para>Ater each package installation you should normally delete the source and
+build directories (for cleanness sake and to save space),
+<emphasis>unless</emphasis> instructed to do otherwise.</para>
 
 <!--
 <para>For your convenience the top of the list contains a link to a file
@@ -325,7 +328,9 @@ Zlib Vsnprintf Patch (&zlib-patch-version;) - &zlib-patch-size;:
 <para>In addition, there are a number of optional patches that have been
 created by the LFS community.  Most of these solve slight problems, or enable
 some functionality that's not enabled by default.  Please feel free to examine
-the patches database, located at <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/patches"/>, and choose any additional patches you might wish to use.</para>
+the patches database, located at
+<ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/patches/"/>, and choose any
+additional patches you might wish to use.</para>
 
 </sect1>
 

chapter05/creatingstage1dir.xml

@@ -30,8 +30,8 @@ from the host) <emphasis>and</emphasis> in the next (when we are chrooted to
 the LFS partition).</para>
 
 <note><para>Study the above command closely. It can be confusing at first
-glance. The <userinput>ln</userinput> command has several syntax variations so
-be sure to check the ln man page before reporting what you may think is an
+glance. The <userinput>ln</userinput> command has several syntax variations,
+so be sure to check the ln man page before reporting what you may think is an
 error.</para></note>
 
 </sect1>

chapter05/setting-environment.xml

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ chose.</para>
 
 <para>The LC_ALL variable controls the localization of certain programs,
 making their messages follow the conventions of a specified country. If your
-host system uses a version of <emphasis>glibc</emphasis> older than 2.2.4,
+host system uses a version of Glibc older than 2.2.4,
 having LC_ALL set to something other than "POSIX" or "C" during this chapter
 may cause trouble if you exit the chroot environment and wish to return later.
 By setting LC_ALL to "POSIX" (or "C", the two are equivalent)  we ensure that

chapter06/bison-inst.xml

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ compilation problem with some packages:</para>
 
 <para>This package has a test suite available which can perform a number of
 checks to ensure it built correctly.  Should you choose to run it, the 
-following command will do so:</para>
+following command will do so (and takes a long time):</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>make check</userinput></screen></para>
 

chapter06/gettext-inst.xml

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 
 <para>This package has a test suite available which can perform a number of
 checks to ensure it built correctly.  Should you choose to run it, the 
-following command will do so:</para>
+following command will do so (and takes a very long time):</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>make check</userinput></screen></para>
 

chapter06/zlib-inst.xml

@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Installation of Zlib</title>
 
-<para>Zlib has a potential buffer overflow in its gzprintf() function,
-that, though difficult to take advantage of, should be taken care of. Do
-so by applying this patch:</para>
+<para>Zlib has a potential buffer overflow in its
+<emphasis>gzprintf()</emphasis> function, that, though difficult to take
+advantage of, should be taken care of by applying this patch:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../zlib-&zlib-patch-version;.patch</userinput></screen></para>