Miscellaneous adjustments.

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chapter01/versions.xml

@@ -1,11 +0,0 @@
-<sect1 id="ch-scatter-version" xreflabel="Chapter 1 - Book Version">
-<title>Book version</title>
-<?dbhtml filename="version.html" dir="chapter01"?>
-
-<para>This is version &version; of the Linux From Scratch book, dated
-&releasedate;. If this book is more than three months old, a newer and better
-version is probably already available. To find out, check one of the mirrors
-listed on <ulink url="&lfs-root;"/>.</para>
-
-</sect1>
-

chapter04/chapter04.xml

@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ Make (&make-version;) - &make-size;:
 <ulink url="http://freshmeat.net/projects/gnumake"/>
 
 Make_devices (&makedev-version;) - &makedev-size;:
-<ulink url="&http-down;~alex/Make_devices-&makedev-version;.bz2"/>
+<ulink url="&lfs-root;~alex/make_devices-&makedev-version;.bz2"/>
 
 Man (&man-version;) - &man-size;:
 <ulink url="http://freshmeat.net/projects/man/"/>

chapter05/glibc.xml

@@ -58,10 +58,10 @@ strangely enough insists on linking against the host's libraries (libgd,
 libpng, libz, and so forth).</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><userinput>--without-cvs</userinput>: This is meant to prevent
-the Makefiles from attempting automatic CVS commits when using a CVS snapshot.
+the Makefiles from attempting automatic CVS checkouts when using a CVS
-But it's not actually needed these days. We use it because it silences an
+snapshot. But it's not actually needed these days. We use it because it
-annoying but harmless warning about a missing <filename>autoconf</filename>
+suppresses an annoying but harmless warning about a missing
-program.</para></listitem>
+<command>autoconf</command> program.</para></listitem>
 </itemizedlist>
 
 <para>During this stage you might see the following warning:</para>

chapter06/autoconf.xml

@@ -24,8 +24,7 @@ can automatically configure source code.</para>
 <screen><userinput>make</userinput></screen>
 
 <para>To have the results tested, issue:
-<userinput>make check</userinput>.This takes a long time, about 2 SBUs,
+<userinput>make check</userinput>. This takes a long time, about 2 SBUs.</para>
-and is strictly optional.</para>
 
 <para>And install the package:</para>
 

chapter06/automake.xml

@@ -25,8 +25,7 @@ with Autoconf.</para>
 <screen><userinput>make</userinput></screen>
 
 <para>To have the results tested, issue:
-<userinput>make check</userinput>. This takes a long time, about 4 SBUs,
+<userinput>make check</userinput>. This takes a long time, about 5 SBUs.</para>
-and is strictly optional.</para>
 
 <para>Install the package:</para>
 

chapter06/chapter06.xml

@@ -255,16 +255,17 @@ dialout:x:10:
 audio:x:11:
 <userinput>EOF</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>The created groups aren't part of any standard -- they are the groups 
+<para>The created groups aren't part of any standard -- they are some of the
-that the MAKEDEV script in the next section uses. Besides the group "root", the 
+groups that the <command>make_devices</command> script in the next section
-LSB (<ulink url="http://www.linuxbase.org"/>) recommends only a group "bin", 
+uses. The LSB (<ulink url="http://www.linuxbase.org">Linux Standard
-with a GID of 1, be present. All other group names and GIDs can be chosen 
+Base</ulink>) recommends only that, beside the group "root" with a GID of 0, a
-freely by the user, as well-written packages don't depend on GID numbers but 
+group "bin" with a GID of 1 be present. All other group names and GIDs can
-use the group's name.</para>
+be chosen freely by the system administrator, since well-written packages don't
+depend on GID numbers but use the group's name.</para>
 
 <para>To get rid of the "I have no name!" prompt, we will start a new shell.
-Since we installed a full Glibc in <xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/>, and have just
+Since we installed a full Glibc in <xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/>,
-created the <filename>/etc/passwd</filename> and
+and have just created the <filename>/etc/passwd</filename> and
 <filename>/etc/group</filename> files, user name and group name resolution
 will now work.</para>
 

chapter06/ed.xml

@@ -23,11 +23,9 @@ days.</para></note>
 <para>Ed normally uses the <emphasis>mktemp</emphasis> function to create
 temporary files in <filename class="directory">/tmp</filename>, but this
 function contains a vulnerability (see the section on Temporary Files in <ulink
-url="http://en.tldp.org/HOWTO/Secure-Programs-HOWTO/avoid-race.html"/>). The
+url="http://en.tldp.org/HOWTO/Secure-Programs-HOWTO/avoid-race.html"/>). Apply
-following patch makes Ed use <emphasis>mkstemp</emphasis> instead, which is
+the following patch to make Ed use <emphasis>mkstemp</emphasis> instead, a
-the recommended way to create temporary files.</para>
+secure way to create temporary files:</para>
-
-<para>Apply the patch:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&ed-patch;</userinput></screen>
 

chapter06/makedev.xml

@@ -63,11 +63,6 @@ you are satisfied, run the script to create the device files:</para>
 <screen><userinput>cd /dev
 ./make_devices</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>(The FHS states that there should be a <filename>MAKEDEV</filename>
-script present in the <filename class="directory">/dev</filename> directory.
-But the FHS is mistaken: it should not dictate anything about files, and limit
-itself to directories.)</para>
-
 <para>If you had success with mounting the devpts file system earlier in <xref
 linkend="ch-system-proc"/>, you can continue with the next section. If you were
 unable to mount devpts, now is the time to try the alternatives. If your kernel

chapter06/tar.xml

@@ -17,8 +17,7 @@
 
 <para>Prepare Tar for compilation:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --bindir=/bin \
+<screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --bindir=/bin --libexecdir=/usr/sbin</userinput></screen>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;--libexecdir=/usr/sbin</userinput></screen>
 
 <para>Compile the package:</para>