From c66cbd789850ec2255d59bbf30b6473ea36442a9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Matthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Thu, 16 Jun 2005 20:11:26 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] More chapter 7 typo and markup fixes (merged from trunk r6026

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/6.1/BOOK@6027 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter01/changelog.xml   | 3 +++
 chapter07/bootscripts.xml | 2 +-
 chapter07/hosts.xml       | 8 ++++----
 chapter07/udev.xml        | 2 +-
 4 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml
index 6d88640c3..85fb52718 100644
--- a/chapter01/changelog.xml
+++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml
@@ -84,6 +84,9 @@ First a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
 </itemizedlist>
 </listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>June 16th, 2005 [matthew]: Another round of typo and markup
+fixes in chapter 7, as reported by Randy McMurchy.</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>June 16th, 2005 [matthew]: Typo and markup fixes in
 chapter 7, as reported by Randy McMurchy.</para></listitem>
 
diff --git a/chapter07/bootscripts.xml b/chapter07/bootscripts.xml
index b0fadea10..46f95e278 100644
--- a/chapter07/bootscripts.xml
+++ b/chapter07/bootscripts.xml
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ daemons</para>
 <varlistentry id="udev-bootscripts">
 <term><command>udev</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>Sets up udev and create the devices nodes in <filename
+<para>Sets up udev and create the device nodes in <filename
 class="directory">/dev</filename></para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts udev-bootscripts"><primary sortas="d-udev">udev</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
diff --git a/chapter07/hosts.xml b/chapter07/hosts.xml
index b2a77c0c0..30644cd34 100644
--- a/chapter07/hosts.xml
+++ b/chapter07/hosts.xml
@@ -17,13 +17,13 @@
 <primary sortas="d-network">network</primary>
 <secondary>/etc/hosts</secondary></indexterm>
 
-<para>If a network card is to be configured, decide on the IP-address,
+<para>If a network card is to be configured, decide on the IP address,
 FQDN, and possible aliases for use in the
 <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file. The syntax is:</para>
 
 <screen>&lt;IP address&gt; myhost.example.org aliases</screen>
 
-<para>Unless the computer is to be visible to the Internet (e.g.,
+<para>Unless the computer is to be visible to the Internet (i.e.,
 there is a registered domain and a valid block of assigned IP
 addresses&mdash;most users do not have this), make sure that the IP
 address is in the private network IP address range. Valid ranges
@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ are:</para>
 
 <screen>	Class Networks
 	A     10.0.0.0
-	B     172.16.0.0 through 172.31.0.0
-	C     192.168.0.0 through 192.168.255.0</screen>
+	B     172.16.0.0 through 172.31.0.255
+	C     192.168.0.0 through 192.168.255.255</screen>
 
 <para>A valid IP address could be 192.168.1.1. A valid FQDN for this
 IP could be www.linuxfromscratch.org (not recommended because this is
diff --git a/chapter07/udev.xml b/chapter07/udev.xml
index 77459a740..e78ae78e3 100644
--- a/chapter07/udev.xml
+++ b/chapter07/udev.xml
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ and make this device available by creating the device node(s) for it.</para>
 <title>Problems with Creating Devices</title>
 
 <para>There are a few known problems when it comes to automatically creating
-devices nodes:</para>
+device nodes:</para>
 
 <para>1) A kernel driver may not export its data to <systemitem
 class="filesystem">sysfs</systemitem>.</para>