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Arbitrary grammatical changes, fixed the address of a mirror.

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chapter01/conventions.xml
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@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ referred to.</para></blockquote>
<blockquote><para>This form of text (fixed width text) is showing screen
output, probably as the result of commands issued and is also used to
show filenames such as <filename>/etc/lilo.conf</filename></para></blockquote>
show filenames such as <filename>/etc/lilo.conf</filename>.</para></blockquote>
<para><emphasis>Emphasis</emphasis></para>

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@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ system we will create a new Linux native partition and filesystem. Here
is where the LFS system will be compiled and installed.</para>
<para>The next step, chapter 5, will discuss the installation of a number of
packages that will form a basic development suite that is used to
packages that will form the basic development suite which is used to
build the actual system, or needed to resolve circular dependencies. For
example, you need a compiler to build a new compiler, and you need a shell
in order to install a new shell. The packages in this chapter will be linked
@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ LFS. While software is being compiled and installed you can simply switch
to a different VC (Virtual Console) or X desktop and continue using your
computer normally.</para>
<para>When all the software from chapter 6 is installed, chapters 7,8 and 9
<para>When all the software from chapter 6 is installed, chapters 7, 8 and 9
will help us finalize our installation. We will set up our boot
scripts in chapter 7. In chapter 8 we will build our final linux kernel and
set up the Linux boot loader. Chapter 9 has some pointers to help you after

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chapter01/mirrors.xml
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@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ url="ftp://ftp.se.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs"/></para></listitem>
url="http://ftp.de.linuxfromscratch.org/"/></para></listitem>
<listitem><para>Freising, Germany [FTP] [4 Mbit] - <ulink
url="ftp://ftp.de.[..]/mirrors/ftp.linuxfromscratch.org/"/></para></listitem>
url="ftp://ftp.de.linuxfromscratch.org/mirrors/ftp.linuxfromscratch.org/"/></para></listitem>
</itemizedlist>

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<sect2 id="pre-organ1">
<title>Part I - Introduction</title>
<para>Part I gives general information about the contents of book
<para>Part I gives general information about the contents of the book
(revisions, where to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and other contact
information). It also contains suggested reading that discusses a few
important considerations to think about before beginning your LFS