Improved English idiom; clarified a few descriptions of scripts.

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David Bryant 2022-12-21 10:42:53 -06:00
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<term><command>checkfs</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>Checks the integrity of the file systems before they are mounted
(with the exception of journal and network based file systems)</para>
(with the exception of journaling and network-based file systems)</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-config-bootscripts checkfs-bootscripts">
<primary sortas="d-checkfs">checkfs</primary>
</indexterm>
@ -173,8 +173,8 @@
<varlistentry id="mountfs-bootscripts">
<term><command>mountfs</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>Mounts all file systems, except ones that are marked
<emphasis>noauto</emphasis> or are network based</para>
<para>Mounts all file systems, except those that are marked
<emphasis>noauto</emphasis>, or are network based</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-config-bootscripts mountfs-bootscripts">
<primary sortas="d-mountfs">mountfs</primary>
</indexterm>
@ -208,7 +208,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>The master run-level control script; it is responsible for
running all the other bootscripts one-by-one, in a sequence determined
by the name of the symbolic links being processed</para>
by the names of the symbolic links to those other bootscripts</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-config-bootscripts rc-bootscripts">
<primary sortas="d-rc">rc</primary>
</indexterm>
@ -239,8 +239,8 @@
<varlistentry id="setclock-bootscripts">
<term><command>setclock</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>Resets the kernel clock to local time in case the hardware clock
is not set to UTC time</para>
<para>Resets the system clock to local time if the hardware clock
is not set to UTC</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-config-bootscripts setclock-bootscripts">
<primary sortas="d-setclock">setclock</primary>
</indexterm>
@ -305,7 +305,7 @@
<term><command>udev</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>Prepares the <filename class="directory">/dev</filename>
directory and starts Udev</para>
directory and starts the udev daemon</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-config-bootscripts udev-bootscripts">
<primary sortas="d-udev">udev</primary>
</indexterm>