diff --git a/chapter02/aboutlfs.xml b/chapter02/aboutlfs.xml index f46d4e3ba..a04b1c422 100644 --- a/chapter02/aboutlfs.xml +++ b/chapter02/aboutlfs.xml @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ /mnt/lfs (or whatever value the variable was set to) when it processes the command line. - Now setting the file mode creation mask (umask) to + Now set the file mode creation mask (umask) to 022 in case the host distro uses a different default: @@ -39,8 +39,8 @@ searchable (only for directories) by anyone (assuming default modes are used by the open(2) system call, new files will end up with permission mode 644 and directories with - mode 755). An over-permissive default can leave security holes in the - LFS system, and an over-restrictive default can cause strange issues + mode 755). An overly-permissive default can leave security holes in the + LFS system, and an overly-restrictive default can cause strange issues building or using the LFS system. diff --git a/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml b/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml index 96f0c591a..e7d651032 100644 --- a/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml +++ b/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ location. We do this so those temporary programs will be overwritten when the final versions are built in . - At first, set the owner and permission mode of the + First, set the owner and permission mode of the $LFS directory (i.e. the root directory in the newly created file system for the LFS system) to &root; and 755 in case the host distro has been