From b6a67d37b5751a8da0696cbac04249c75809e383 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: David Bryant Date: Thu, 22 Sep 2022 17:08:43 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Clean up English idiom / grammar in chapter 3.1 (Introduction). (Note that "errata" are plural; "erratum" is the singular nun.) --- chapter03/introduction.xml | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/chapter03/introduction.xml b/chapter03/introduction.xml index 1b658e89d..1a69187a2 100644 --- a/chapter03/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter03/introduction.xml @@ -13,17 +13,17 @@ This chapter includes a list of packages that need to be downloaded in order to build a basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to versions of the software that are known to work, and this book is based on - their use. We highly recommend against using different versions because the build + their use. We highly recommend against using different versions, because the build commands for one version may not work with a different version, unless the - different version is specified by a LFS errata or security advisory. + different version is specified by an LFS erratum or security advisory. The newest package versions may also have problems that require work-arounds. These work-arounds will be developed and stabilized in the development version of the book. For some packages, the release tarball and the (Git or SVN) - repository snapshot tarball for this release may be published with - similar file name. A release tarball contains generated files (for - example, configure script generated by + repository snapshot tarball for that release may be published with + similar file names. A release tarball contains generated files (for + example, a configure script generated by autoconf), in addition to the contents of the corresponding repository snapshot. The book uses release tarballs whenever possible. Using a repository snapshot instead of a release @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ For stable versions of the book, a tarball of all the needed files - can be downloaded from one of the LFS files mirrors listed at + can be downloaded from one of the mirror sites listed at .