diff --git a/chapter03/introduction.xml b/chapter03/introduction.xml
index 1b658e89d..1a69187a2 100644
--- a/chapter03/introduction.xml
+++ b/chapter03/introduction.xml
@@ -13,17 +13,17 @@
This chapter includes a list of packages that need to be downloaded in
order to build a basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to
versions of the software that are known to work, and this book is based on
- their use. We highly recommend against using different versions because the build
+ their use. We highly recommend against using different versions, because the build
commands for one version may not work with a different version, unless the
- different version is specified by a LFS errata or security advisory.
+ different version is specified by an LFS erratum or security advisory.
The newest package versions may also have problems that require
work-arounds. These work-arounds will be developed and stabilized in the
development version of the book.
For some packages, the release tarball and the (Git or SVN)
- repository snapshot tarball for this release may be published with
- similar file name. A release tarball contains generated files (for
- example, configure script generated by
+ repository snapshot tarball for that release may be published with
+ similar file names. A release tarball contains generated files (for
+ example, a configure script generated by
autoconf), in addition to the contents of the
corresponding repository snapshot. The book uses release tarballs
whenever possible. Using a repository snapshot instead of a release
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
For stable versions of the book, a tarball of all the needed files
- can be downloaded from one of the LFS files mirrors listed at
+ can be downloaded from one of the mirror sites listed at
.