diff --git a/appendixb/acknowledgments.xml b/appendixb/acknowledgments.xml
index 610cea299..36420e0f4 100644
--- a/appendixb/acknowledgments.xml
+++ b/appendixb/acknowledgments.xml
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ From Scratch (ALFS), BLFS and hints project logo
creator
Nathan
-Coulson <nathan@linuxfromscratch.org> – LFS bootscripts
+Coulson <nathan@linuxfromscratch.org> – LFS-Bootscripts
maintainer
Jeroen
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ Editor, hints and patches projects maintainer
Jeremy
Utley <jeremy@linuxfromscratch.org> – LFS Technical
-Writer, Bugzilla maintainer, LFS bootscripts maintainer, LFS Server
+Writer, Bugzilla maintainer, LFS-Bootscripts maintainer, LFS Server
co-administrator
Zack
diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml
index fa6253a1f..c097def7e 100644
--- a/chapter01/changelog.xml
+++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml
@@ -87,6 +87,9 @@ First a summary, then a detailed log.
+July 1st, 2005 [archaic]: Brought all occurences of
+LFS-Bootscripts into conformity.
+
June 30th, 2005 [archaic]: Several minor wording changes in
chapters 1 - 5 (matt).
diff --git a/chapter01/how.xml b/chapter01/how.xml
index 0e752e076..577f2b695 100644
--- a/chapter01/how.xml
+++ b/chapter01/how.xml
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ waiting for package compilation to complete, a user can switch to a
different virtual console (VC) or X desktop and continue using the
computer as normal.
-To finish the installation, the bootscripts are set up in To finish the installation, the LFS-Bootscripts are set up in , and the kernel and boot loader are set
up in . contains information on furthering the
diff --git a/chapter06/devices.xml b/chapter06/devices.xml
index e094f1528..22bb3bdb7 100644
--- a/chapter06/devices.xml
+++ b/chapter06/devices.xml
@@ -30,8 +30,8 @@ filesystem (such as tmpfs) on the
/dev directory, and allow the devices to
be created dynamically on that virtual filesystem as they are detected or
accessed. This is generally done during the boot process. Since this new system
-has not been booted, it is necessary to do what the bootscripts would otherwise
-do by mounting /dev:
+has not been booted, it is necessary to do what the LFS-Bootscripts package would
+otherwise do by mounting /dev:
mount -n -t tmpfs none /dev
@@ -51,9 +51,9 @@ chown root:tty /dev/{console,ptmx,tty}
There are some symlinks and directories required by LFS that are created
-during system startup by the bootscripts. Since this is a chroot environment and
-not a booted environment, those symlinks and directories need to be created
-here:
+during system startup by the LFS-Bootscripts package. Since this is a chroot
+environment and not a booted environment, those symlinks and directories need to
+be created here:
ln -s /proc/self/fd /dev/fd
ln -s /proc/self/fd/0 /dev/stdin
diff --git a/chapter06/hotplug.xml b/chapter06/hotplug.xml
index 516645464..ee5306761 100644
--- a/chapter06/hotplug.xml
+++ b/chapter06/hotplug.xml
@@ -40,13 +40,13 @@ running kernel.
cp etc/hotplug/pnp.distmap /etc/hotplug
-Remove the init script that Hotplug installs, since we're going to be
-using the script included with LFS-Bootscripts:
+Remove the init script that Hotplug installs since we are going to be
+using the script included in the LFS-Bootscripts package:
rm -rf /etc/init.d
-Network device hotplugging is not supported by LFS-Bootscripts yet. For
-that reason, remove the network hotplug agent:
+Network device hotplugging is not yet supported by the LFS-Bootscripts
+package. For that reason, remove the network hotplug agent:
rm -f /etc/hotplug/net.agent
@@ -90,11 +90,11 @@ sortas="b-hotplug">hotplug
/etc/hotplug/*.rc
These scripts are used for cold plugging, i.e., detecting and acting upon
-hardware already present during system startup. They are called by the
-hotplug initscript that comes from the LFS-Bootscripts
-package. The *.rc scripts try to recover hotplug events that
-were lost during system boot because, for example, the root filesystem was not
-mounted by the kernel
+hardware already present during system startup. They are called by the
+hotplug initscript included in the LFS-Bootscripts package.
+The *.rc scripts try to recover hotplug events that were lost
+during system boot because, for example, the root filesystem was not mounted by
+the kernel
/etc/hotplug/*.rc
diff --git a/chapter06/iproute2.xml b/chapter06/iproute2.xml
index ef957cda8..fee60ae80 100644
--- a/chapter06/iproute2.xml
+++ b/chapter06/iproute2.xml
@@ -54,10 +54,10 @@
SBINDIR=/sbin
- This makes sure that the IPRoute2 binaries will install into
- /sbin. This is the correct
- location according to the FHS, because some of the IPRoute2 binaries are used
- in the bootscripts.
+ This ensures that the IPRoute2 binaries will install into
+ /sbin. This is the correct location
+ according to the FHS, because some of the IPRoute2 binaries are used by
+ the LFS-Bootscripts package.
diff --git a/chapter06/psmisc.xml b/chapter06/psmisc.xml
index ba7c627da..717ebe49e 100644
--- a/chapter06/psmisc.xml
+++ b/chapter06/psmisc.xml
@@ -38,12 +38,11 @@ GCC, Gettext, Glibc, Grep, Make, Ncurses, and Sed
--exec-prefix=""
-This causes the binaries to be installed in /bin instead of /usr/bin. Because the Psmisc programs are
-often used in bootscripts, they should be available when the /usr file system is not
-mounted.
+This ensures that the Psmisc binaries will install into
+/bin instead of /usr/bin. This is the correct location according to
+the FHS, because some of the Psmisc binaries are used by the LFS-Bootscripts
+package.
diff --git a/chapter06/util-linux.xml b/chapter06/util-linux.xml
index bbd70fb0f..de2a8d170 100644
--- a/chapter06/util-linux.xml
+++ b/chapter06/util-linux.xml
@@ -80,8 +80,8 @@ by Glibc) from being built and installed again.
This package does not come with a test suite.
Install the package and move the logger binary to
-/bin as it is needed by the bootscripts:
-
+/bin as it is needed by the
+LFS-Bootscripts package:
make HAVE_KILL=yes HAVE_SLN=yes install
mv /usr/bin/logger /bin
diff --git a/chapter07/bootscripts.xml b/chapter07/bootscripts.xml
index 46f95e278..5e0c31478 100644
--- a/chapter07/bootscripts.xml
+++ b/chapter07/bootscripts.xml
@@ -10,7 +10,8 @@
Bootscripts
-The LFS-Bootscripts package contains a set of bootscripts.
+The LFS-Bootscripts package contains a set of scripts to start/stop the
+LFS system at bootup/shutdown.
&buildtime;
@@ -33,7 +34,7 @@
-Contents of LFS-bootscripts
+Contents of LFS-Bootscripts
Installed scripts
diff --git a/chapter07/introduction.xml b/chapter07/introduction.xml
index 34c8cf514..2c3ca8c4c 100644
--- a/chapter07/introduction.xml
+++ b/chapter07/introduction.xml
@@ -7,10 +7,10 @@
Introduction
-This chapter details how to install the bootscripts and set them up
-properly. Most of these scripts will work without modification, but a
-few require additional configuration files because they deal with
-hardware-dependent information.
+This chapter details how to install and configure the LFS-Bootscripts
+package. Most of these scripts will work without modification, but a few require
+additional configuration files because they deal with hardware-dependent
+information.
System-V style init scripts are employed in this book because they are
widely used. For additional options, a hint detailing the BSD style
diff --git a/chapter07/network.xml b/chapter07/network.xml
index 998303fc7..f389ec40a 100644
--- a/chapter07/network.xml
+++ b/chapter07/network.xml
@@ -54,13 +54,12 @@ Network Interface Card (NIC) during booting of the system. If set
to anything but yes
the NIC will be ignored by the
network script and not brought up.
-The SERVICE variable defines the method of
-obtaining the IP address. The LFS bootscripts have a modular IP
-assignment format, and creating additional files in the /etc/sysconfig/network-devices/services
-/etc/sysconfig/network- devices/services
-directory allows other IP assignment methods. This is commonly used
-for Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol (DHCP), which is addressed in the BLFS book.
+The SERVICE variable defines the method of obtaining the IP
+address. The LFS-Bootscripts package has a modular IP assignment format, and
+creating additional files in the /etc/sysconfig/network-devices/services directory
+allows other IP assignment methods. This is commonly used for Dynamic Host
+Configuration Protocol (DHCP), which is addressed in the BLFS book.
The GATEWAY variable should contain
the default gateway IP address, if one is present. If not, then comment out
diff --git a/chapter07/udev.xml b/chapter07/udev.xml
index 9d1946d4b..7967a8f2b 100644
--- a/chapter07/udev.xml
+++ b/chapter07/udev.xml
@@ -82,27 +82,24 @@ built-in drivers registered with sysfs are available to userspace
processes and to udev for device node creation.
-The S10udev initscript takes care of creating
-these device nodes when Linux is booted. This script starts with
-registering /sbin/udevsend as a hotplug event handler.
-Hotplug events (discussed below) should not be generated during this
-stage, but udev is registered just in case they do
-occur. The udevstart program then walks through
-the /sys filesystem and
-creates devices under /dev that
-match the descriptions. For example,
-/sys/class/tty/vcs/dev contains the string
-7:0
This string is used by udevstart
-to create /dev/vcs with major number
-7 and minor 0. The names and
-permissions of the nodes created under the
-/dev directory are configured according
-to the rules specified in the files within the
-/etc/udev/rules.d/ directory. These are
-numbered in a similar fashion to the LFS bootscripts. If
-udev can't find a rule for the device it is creating, it will
-default permissions to 660 and ownership to
-root:root.
+The S10udev initscript takes care of creating these
+device nodes when Linux is booted. This script starts with registering
+/sbin/udevsend as a hotplug event handler. Hotplug events
+(discussed below) should not be generated during this stage, but
+udev is registered just in case they do occur. The
+udevstart program then walks through the /sys filesystem and creates devices under
+/dev that match the descriptions. For
+example, /sys/class/tty/vcs/dev contains the string
+7:0
This string is used by udevstart to create
+/dev/vcs with major number 7 and minor
+0. The names and permissions of the nodes created under
+the /dev directory are configured
+according to the rules specified in the files within the /etc/udev/rules.d/ directory. These are numbered in
+a similar fashion to the LFS-Bootscripts package. If udev
+can't find a rule for the device it is creating, it will default permissions to
+660 and ownership to root:root.
Once the above stage is complete, all devices that were already
present and have compiled-in drivers will be available for use. What
diff --git a/general.ent b/general.ent
index c71a7c214..350c909be 100644
--- a/general.ent
+++ b/general.ent
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-
-
+
+