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@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ errors, a custom-built Linux system was finally built. It was fully
operational and perfectly usable like any of the other Linux systems out
there at the time. But it was my own creation. It was very satisfying to
have put together such a system yourself. The only thing better would have
been to create each piece of software yourself. This was the next best
been to create each piece of software myself. This was the next best
thing.</para>
<para>As I shared my goals and experiences with other members of the Linux
@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ enhance their (existing) Linux skills. Out of this broadened interest, the
provides the background and instructions necessary for you to design and
build your own system. While this book provides a template that will result
in a correctly working system, you are free to alter the instructions to
suit yourself . that is the whole point of the project after all. You
suit yourself, which is in part the whole point of this project after all. You
remain in control; we just lend a helping hand to get you started on your
own journey.</para>