Grammar fixes.

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Simon Perreault 2001-03-15 17:08:12 +00:00
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<para>
Typing out all the bootscripts in chapters 7 and 9 can be a long tedious
process, not to mention very error prone.
process, not to mention very error-prone.
</para>
<para>
@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ from <ulink
url="http://download.linuxfromscratch.org/bootscripts/">
http://download.linuxfromscratch.org/bootscripts/</ulink> or <ulink
url="ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/bootscripts/">
ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/bootscripts/</ulink>
ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/bootscripts/</ulink>.
</para>
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<para>
Before you can actually start doing something with a package, you need
to unpack it first. Often you will find the package files being tar'ed and
gzip'ed (you can determind this by looking at the extension of the file.
tar'ed and gzip'ed archives have a .tar.gz or .tgz extension for
example)). I'm not going to write down every time how to ungzip and how
to untar an archive. I will tell you how to do that once, in this paragraph.
gzip'ed. (You can determine this by looking at the extension of the file.
tar'ed and gzip'ed archives have a .tar.gz or .tgz extension, for
example.) I'm not going to write down every time how to ungzip and how
to untar an archive. I will tell you how to do that once, in this section.
There is also the possibility that you have the ability of downloading
a .tar.bz2 file. Such a file is tar'ed and compressed with the bzip2 program.
Bzip2 achieves a better compression than the commonly used gzip does. In
@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ When you have a file that is tar'ed, you unpack it by running:
When the archive is unpacked a new directory will be created under the
current directory (and this document assumes that you unpack the archives
under the $LFS/usr/src directory). You have to enter that new directory
before you continue with the installation instructions. So everytime the
before you continue with the installation instructions. So every time the
book is going to install a program, it's up to you to unpack the source
archive.
</para>
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<para>
After you have installed a package you can do two things with it. You can
either delete the directory that contains the sources or you can keep it.
If you decide to keep it, that's fine by me. But if you need the same package
again in a later chapter you need to delete the directory first before using
If you decide to keep it, that's fine with me. But, if you need the same package
again in a later chapter, you need to delete the directory first before using
it again. If you don't do this, you might end up in trouble because old
settings will be used (settings that apply to your normal Linux system but
which don't always apply to your LFS system). Doing a simple make clean