diff --git a/chapter08/ninja.xml b/chapter08/ninja.xml
index 4f3a25e88..7c72b9598 100644
--- a/chapter08/ninja.xml
+++ b/chapter08/ninja.xml
@@ -36,10 +36,10 @@
- This section is not strictly required for LFS if not using
- systemd. On the other hand, ninja associated to meson makes
+ This section is not strictly required when LFS does not use
+ systemd. On the other hand, Ninja, along with Meson, makes
a powerful build system combination,
- which is expected to be used more and more often. It is required for
+ which will probably be used more and more often. It is required for
several packages in the BLFS
book.
@@ -49,12 +49,12 @@
Installation of Ninja
- When run, ninja normally runs a maximum number of processes
- in parallel. By default this is the number of cores on the system
- plus two. In some cases this can overheat a CPU or run a system out
- of memory. If run from the command line, passing a -jN parameter
- will limit the number of parallel processes, but some packages
- embed the execution of ninja and do not pass a -j parameter.
+ When run, ninja normally utilizes the greatest possible number of processes
+ in parallel. By default this is the number of cores on the system,
+ plus two. This may overheat the CPU, or make the system run out
+ of memory. When ninja is invoked from the command line, passing the -jN parameter
+ will limit the number of parallel processes. Some packages
+ embed the execution of ninja, and do not pass the -j parameter on to it.
Using the optional procedure below allows a user to
limit the number of parallel processes via an environment variable,
@@ -64,8 +64,8 @@
will limit ninja to four parallel processes.
- If desired, add the capability to use the environment variable
- NINJAJOBS by running:
+ If desired, make ninja recognize the environment variable
+ NINJAJOBS by running the stream editor:
sed -i '/int Guess/a \
int j = 0;\
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
--bootstrap
- This parameter forces ninja to rebuild itself for the current
+ This parameter forces Ninja to rebuild itself for the current
system.
diff --git a/chapter08/wheel.xml b/chapter08/wheel.xml
index 7ab14426a..57457dacc 100644
--- a/chapter08/wheel.xml
+++ b/chapter08/wheel.xml
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@
wheel
- is a utility to unpack, pack, or convert wheel packages
+ is a utility to unpack, pack, or convert wheel archives
wheel