diff --git a/chapter11/afterlfs.xml b/chapter11/afterlfs.xml
index 0a125d711..fd863f76b 100644
--- a/chapter11/afterlfs.xml
+++ b/chapter11/afterlfs.xml
@@ -39,8 +39,8 @@
XFCE,
KDE, or
Gnome
- based on the
- X Window graphical environment
+ based on a basic
+ graphical environment
and several graphical based applications such as the
Firefox web browser,
Thunderbird email client,
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
In addition to the above, there is a set of applications that are
suitable for all systems for system management. These applications are
- all in the full BLFS book. Not
+ all in the BLFS book. Not
all packages are needed in all environments. For example
dhcpcd,
is not appropriate for a server and
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
- Working in a partial BLFS environment
+ Working in a basic LFS environment
When you initially boot into LFS, you have all the internal tools to build
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@
In order to properly build packages in chroot, you will also need to
remember to mount the virtual file systems if they are not already
mounted. One way to do this is to create a script on the
- HOST system:
+ HOST system:
cat > ~/mount-virt.sh << "EOF"