Changing a few it's to its, and fixing other typos.

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chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -124,9 +124,8 @@ Anderson Lizardo.</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>September 11th, 2003 [jwrober]: Grammar fix in Ch5 Tcl install 
 directions provided by Anderson Lizardo.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>September 11th, 2003 [jwrober]: Small textual change in the Ch5 
+<listitem><para>September 11th, 2003 [jwrober]: Small textual change in the Ch5
-lockin Glibc page for /lib/ld.so.1 provided by Anderson 
+lockin Glibc page for /lib/ld.so.1 provided by Anderson Lizardo.</para></listitem>
-Lizardo.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 11th, 2003 [jeremy]: Added bootloader setup to
 Chapter 8, after the addition of Grub to the book.</para></listitem>
@@ -140,8 +139,8 @@ to optional actions.  Added a note to use the wiki for failed tests.</para></lis
 <listitem><para>September 11th, 2003 [jeremy]: Added Bison patch, backported
 from CVS, to fix pwlib compilation problems</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>September 11th, 2003 [jeremy]: Added Greg's patch to gcc to
+<listitem><para>September 11th, 2003 [jeremy]: Added Greg's patch to GCC to
-suppress the installation of libiberty, and changed binutils to allow it's
+suppress the installation of libiberty, and changed Binutils to allow its
 libiberty to stay.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 11th, 2003 [jeremy]: Added caution tags around the
@@ -159,14 +158,16 @@ Removed compilation of C++, added Zack's return-type patch.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 9th, 2003 [jeremy]: Chapter 6 - Coreutils:
 Added coreutils-5.0-hostname-2.patch, which suppresses the build of the
-hostname binary, and also suppresses it's check.</para></listitem>
+hostname binary, and also suppresses its check.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 9th, 2003 [jeremy]: Added some notes regarding failed
-tests to glibc and dejagnu.</para></listitem>
+tests to Glibc and Dejagnu.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>September 9th, 2003 [jeremy]: Glibc - Added commands to both chapter 5 and 6 to include minimum locales necessary for checks.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>September 9th, 2003 [jeremy]: Glibc - Added commands to both
+Chapter 5 and 6 to include minimum locales necessary for
+checks.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>September 9th, 2003 [jeremy]: Chapter 6 - Removed zlib's
+<listitem><para>September 9th, 2003 [jeremy]: Chapter 6 - Removed Zlib's
 munging of CFLAGS in favor of a note to add -fPIC.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 8th, 2003 [matt]: Chapter 5 - Fixed the rm command
@@ -185,16 +186,16 @@ Corrected the make check error explanation</para></listitem>
 Changed the default device creation to generic-nopty, because we now use devpts
 by default.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>September 5th, 2003 [jeremy]: Chapter 6 - GCC:
+<listitem><para>September 5th, 2003 [jeremy]: Chapter 6 - GCC: Corrected
-Corrected wording to reflect the removal of the /usr/lib/cpp symlink
+wording to reflect the removal of the /usr/lib/cpp symlink.</para></listitem>
-</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 5th, 2003 [jeremy]: Corrected perl libc patch to -2,
 changing the old /stage1 structure to /tools</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 5th, 2003 [matt]: Chapter 6 - Updated gcc specs patch
 and upgraded to man-1.5m2</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>September 4th, 2003 [jeremy]: Chapter 6 - Creating 
+
+<listitem><para>September 4th, 2003 [jeremy]: Chapter 6 - Creating
 Directories: Eliminated the creation of /usr/tmp - Closes bug 176.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 4th, 2003 [jeremy]: Chapter 6 - Mounting Proc:
@@ -470,7 +471,7 @@ Don't install the texmf data. It's not used by anything.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>May 12th, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 05 &amp; 06 - Installing
 Ncurses: In Chapter 6, symlink creation has been updated to include
-libcurses.*, and libncurses++.a has it's properties changed to 644.
+libcurses.*, and libncurses++.a has its properties changed to 644.
 Chapter 5 doesn't need any libcurses.* so those are removed.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>May 12th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 06 - Basic Network: Added
@@ -532,7 +533,7 @@ Fix up the symlinks so that they follow suit of other library symlinks.
 No more weirdness here.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>May 11th, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 06 - Installing Procps:
-Removed XSCPT="" cruft and it's corresponding paragraph. This stuff
+Removed XSCPT="" cruft and its corresponding paragraph. This stuff
 isn't needed anymore.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>May 11th, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 06 - Installing Ncurses:

chapter05/grep-inst.xml

@@ -12,11 +12,12 @@
 
 <itemizedlist>
 <listitem><para><userinput>--disable-perl-regexp</userinput>: This makes sure
-that grep does not get linked against a PCRE library that may be present on
+that <userinput>grep</userinput> does not get linked against a PCRE library
-the host, but would not be available once we enter the chroot environment.</para></listitem>
+that may be present on the host, but would not be available once we enter the
+chroot environment.</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para><userinput>--with-included-regex</userinput>: This ensures that
-grep uses it's internal regular expression code.  Without it, it will use
+Grep uses its internal regular expression code.  Without it, it will use
-the code from glibc, which is known to be slightly buggy.</para></listitem>
+the code from Glibc, which is known to be slightly buggy.</para></listitem>
 </itemizedlist>
 
 <para>Compile the programs:</para>

chapter05/ncurses-inst.xml

@@ -20,10 +20,10 @@ deprecated headers.</para>
 <para>The meaning of the configure options:</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
-<listitem><para><userinput>--without-ada</userinput>: This tells ncurses not
+<listitem><para><userinput>--without-ada</userinput>: This tells Ncurses not
-to build it's Ada bindings, even if an Ada compiler is installed on the host.
+to build its Ada bindings, even if an Ada compiler is installed on the host.
-This must be done because once we enter the chroot, Ada will no longer be
+This must be done because once we enter the chroot environment, Ada will no
-available.</para></listitem>
+longer be available.</para></listitem>
 </itemizedlist>
 
 <para>Compile the programs and libraries:</para>

chapter06/zlib-inst.xml

@@ -13,10 +13,10 @@ so by applying this patch:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --shared</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>Note:  Zlib is known to build it's shared library incorrectly
+<para>Note: Zlib is known to build its shared library incorrectly if a CFLAGS
-if a CFLAGS is specified in the environment.  If you are using your
+is specified in the environment. If you are using your own CFLAGS variables,
-own CFLAGS variables, ensure you add the <emphasis role="strong">-fPIC</emphasis>
+ensure you add the <emphasis role="strong">-fPIC</emphasis> directive during
-directive during this stage, and remove it after.</para>
+this stage, and remove it afterwards.</para>
 
 <para>Compile the package:</para>
 

chapter08/grub.xml

@@ -7,12 +7,12 @@ we need to ensure we can boot it.  To do this, we will run the grub program.</pa
 
 <para><screen><userinput>grub</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>Grub uses it's own naming structure for drives, in the form of hd(a,b),
+<para>Grub uses its own naming structure for drives, in the form of (hdn,m),
-where a is the hard drive number, and b is the partition number, both of which
+where n is the hard drive number, and m is the partition number, both of which
-start from zero.  So, partition hda1 would be (hd0,0) to grub, and hdb2 would
+start from zero.  So, partition hda1 would be (hd0,0) to Grub, and hdb2 would
 be (hd1,1).  Also, Grub doesn't pay attention to CDROM drives at all, so if,
 for example, you have a CD on hdb, and a second hard drive on hdc, partitions
-on that second hard drive would still be (hd1,b).</para>
+on that second hard drive would still be (hd1,m).</para>
 
 <para>So, using the information above, select the appropriate designator for
 your root partition.  For the purposes of this, we will assume (hd0,3) for
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ your root partition.  First, we tell grub where to find its files:</para>
 setup (hd0)
 quit</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>This tells grub to look for its files on hda4 (hd0,3), and install itself
+<para>This tells Grub to look for its files on hda4 (hd0,3), and install itself
 into the MBR (Master Boot Record) of hda.</para>
 
 <para>Also, we need to create the <filename>menu.lst</filename> file, which
@@ -67,9 +67,10 @@ rootnoverify (hd0,0)
 chainloader +1
 EOF</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>You can find more info regarding Grub on it's web site, located at:
+<para>You can find more info regarding Grub on its web site, located at:
-<ulink url="http://www.gnu.org/software/grub"/>, as well as the LFS Grub HOWTO
+<ulink url="http://www.gnu.org/software/grub"/>, as well as in the LFS Grub
-located at: <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/hints/downloads/files/grub-howto.txt"/>.</para>
+HOWTO located at:
+<ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/hints/downloads/files/grub-howto.txt"/>.</para>
 
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