diff --git a/chapter01/whatsnew.xml b/chapter01/whatsnew.xml index 2f5f76159..10f7d0a32 100644 --- a/chapter01/whatsnew.xml +++ b/chapter01/whatsnew.xml @@ -135,9 +135,6 @@ - diff --git a/chapter07/clock.xml b/chapter07/clock.xml index a4f204f18..40006fdcf 100644 --- a/chapter07/clock.xml +++ b/chapter07/clock.xml @@ -70,6 +70,6 @@ EOF timedatectl list-timezones Please note that timedatectl command can - be used only on a system booted with Systemd. + be used only on a system booted with systemd. diff --git a/chapter07/console.xml b/chapter07/console.xml index 323bfaa3b..175ff7c5a 100644 --- a/chapter07/console.xml +++ b/chapter07/console.xml @@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ EOF localectl set-keymap MAP Please note that localectl command can - be used only on a system booted with Systemd. + be used only on a system booted with systemd. You can also use localectl utility with the corresponding parameters to change X11 keyboard layout, model, variant diff --git a/chapter07/introduction.xml b/chapter07/introduction.xml index d715a835b..0d89c8a7b 100644 --- a/chapter07/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter07/introduction.xml @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Introduction - This chapter discusses configuration files and boot scripts. + This chapter discusses configuration files and systemd services. First, the general configuration files needed to set up networking are presented. @@ -18,6 +18,9 @@ + + + @@ -35,12 +38,9 @@ - Third, configuring the hostname, system clock, and keyboard layout. + Third, configuring the system clock and keyboard layout. - - - diff --git a/chapter07/locale.xml b/chapter07/locale.xml index 90a54c2d5..082c4d2d2 100644 --- a/chapter07/locale.xml +++ b/chapter07/locale.xml @@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ LC_ALL=<locale name> locale int_prefix EOF Note that you can modify /etc/locale.conf with - Systemd localectl utility. To use localectl + systemd localectl utility. To use localectl for the example above, run: localectl set-locale LANG="<ll>_<CC>.<charmap><@modifiers>" @@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ EOF localectl set-locale LANG="en_US.UTF-8" LC_CTYPE="en_US" Please note that localectl command can - be used only on a system booted with Systemd. + be used only on a system booted with systemd. The C (default) and en_US (the recommended one for United States English users) locales are different. C diff --git a/chapter07/udev.xml b/chapter07/udev.xml index 72acd8a90..8234c4cb7 100644 --- a/chapter07/udev.xml +++ b/chapter07/udev.xml @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ In , we installed Udev - from the Systemd source package. Before we go into the details regarding + from the systemd source package. Before we go into the details regarding how this works, a brief history of previous methods of handling devices is in order. diff --git a/chapter08/kernel.xml b/chapter08/kernel.xml index 5d19e805a..27b48ccff 100644 --- a/chapter08/kernel.xml +++ b/chapter08/kernel.xml @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ File systems ---> [*] Tmpfs extended attributes While "The IPv6 Protocol" is not strictly required, it is - highly recommended by the Systemd developers. + highly recommended by the systemd developers. make LANG=<host_LANG_value> LC_ALL= menuconfig diff --git a/chapter09/theend.xml b/chapter09/theend.xml index 236370789..a8575f64b 100644 --- a/chapter09/theend.xml +++ b/chapter09/theend.xml @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ success with your shiny new custom-built Linux system. Create an /etc/os-release file required by - Systemd: + systemd: cat > /etc/os-release << "EOF" NAME="Linux From Scratch" @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ PRETTY_NAME="Linux From Scratch &version;" EOF It is recommended to create /etc/lfs-release - for compatibility with non Systemd branch. By having this file, it is very + for compatibility with non systemd branch. By having this file, it is very easy for you (and for us if you need to ask for help at some point) to find out which LFS version is installed on the system. Create this file by running: