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<title>blfs-book</title>
<para>The blfs-book list is used for coordinating
the BLFS Book's maintenance.
the BLFS book's maintenance.
Traffic on it is mostly Bugzilla and CVS commit messages.
It is important that all development discussion
of interest to the Book's users take place on blfs-dev, not here.</para>
of interest to the book's users take place on blfs-dev, not here.</para>
</sect2>

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<sect2>
<title>blfs-dev</title>
<para>The blfs-dev list is for discussion of BLFS Book development.</para>
<para>The blfs-dev list is for discussion of BLFS book development.</para>
</sect2>

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<para>When all the software from Chapter 6 is installed, Chapters 7, 8 and 9
will help us finalize our installation. We will set up our boot
scripts in Chapter 7. In Chapter 8 we will build our final linux kernel and
scripts in Chapter 7. In Chapter 8 we will build our final Linux kernel and
set up the Linux boot loader. Chapter 9 has some pointers to help you after
you finish the book. Then finally, you reboot your system and boot into your
new LFS system, and start to really use it.</para>

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<sect2>
<title>lfs-book</title>
<para>The lfs-book list is used for coordinating the LFS Book's maintenance.
<para>The lfs-book list is used for coordinating the LFS book's maintenance.
Traffic on it is mostly Bugzilla and CVS commit messages.
It is important that all development discussion
of interest to the Book's users take place on lfs-dev, not here.</para>
of interest to the book's users take place on lfs-dev, not here.</para>
</sect2>

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<sect2>
<title>lfs-dev</title>
<para>The lfs-dev list is for discussion of LFS Book development.</para>
<para>The lfs-dev list is for discussion of LFS book development.</para>
</sect2>

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<para><screen><userinput>make</userinput></screen></para>
<para>And finsh off installing the package:</para>
<para>And finish off installing the package:</para>
<para><screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen></para>

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thing to keep in mind if you decide to use shadow support: that
programs that need to verify passwords (for example xdm, ftp daemons,
pop3 daemons) need to be 'shadow-compliant', that is they need to
be able to work with shadow'ed passwords.</para>
be able to work with shadowed passwords.</para>
<para>To enable shadow'ed passwords, run the following command:</para>
<para>To enable shadowed passwords, run the following command:</para>
<para><screen><userinput>/usr/sbin/pwconv</userinput></screen></para>

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<title>Command explanations</title>
<para><userinput>--enable-threads=posix:</userinput> This enables C++
exception handling for multithreaded code.</para>
exception handling for multi-threaded code.</para>
<para><userinput>--enable-__cxa_atexit:</userinput> This option will result
in C++ shared libraries and C++ programs that are interoperable with other
linux distributions.</para>
Linux distributions.</para>
<para><userinput>--enable-clocale=gnu:</userinput> There is a risk that
some people will build ABI incompatible C++ libraries if they didn't install

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<!ENTITY book SYSTEM "book/book.xml">
<!ENTITY version "20030111">
<!ENTITY releasedate "January 11th, 2003">
<!ENTITY version "20030113">
<!ENTITY releasedate "January 13th, 2003">
<!ENTITY ftp-root "ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">
<!ENTITY http-root "http://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">

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<para>If you do not wish to build your own Linux system from scratch, then
you probably don't want to read this book. Our goal is to build a complete
and useable foundation system. If you only want to know what happens while
and usable foundation system. If you only want to know what happens while
your computer boots, then we recommend the
<quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> HOWTO. The HOWTO builds a bare
system which is similar to that of this book, but it focuses strictly on

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This allows you to review it, to omit unwanted ingredients, and to
add your own ingredients which enhance the flavor of your burger. When you
are satisfied with the recipe, you go on to preparing it. You make it just
the way you like it: broil it, bake it, deep-fry it, barbeque it, or eat it
the way you like it: broil it, bake it, deep-fry it, barbecue it, or eat it
tar-tar (raw).</para>
<para>Another analogy that we can use is that of comparing LFS with a