From 72fb9bf99704f015341645d1f9c8ae7c74a128d5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bruce Dubbs Date: Mon, 16 May 2016 22:12:01 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Moved Host System Requirements to Chapter 2 and made minor editorial changes. git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@11061 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689 --- chapter01/changelog.xml | 4 ++++ chapter02/chapter02.xml | 3 ++- {prologue => chapter02}/hostreqs.xml | 27 ++++++++++++++++----------- chapter02/introduction.xml | 7 ++++--- prologue/preface.xml | 1 - 5 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) rename {prologue => chapter02}/hostreqs.xml (92%) diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml index f99e13f6d..2ca396a2c 100644 --- a/chapter01/changelog.xml +++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml @@ -38,6 +38,10 @@ 2016-05-16 + + [bdubbs] - Moved Host System Requirements to Chapter 2 + and made minor editorial changes. + [bdubbs] - Updated to tar-1.29. Fixes #3932. diff --git a/chapter02/chapter02.xml b/chapter02/chapter02.xml index aa62827bb..35d265bb7 100644 --- a/chapter02/chapter02.xml +++ b/chapter02/chapter02.xml @@ -9,9 +9,10 @@ - Preparing a New Partition + Preparing the Host System + diff --git a/prologue/hostreqs.xml b/chapter02/hostreqs.xml similarity index 92% rename from prologue/hostreqs.xml rename to chapter02/hostreqs.xml index c52f81e0f..5e92f8a8b 100644 --- a/prologue/hostreqs.xml +++ b/chapter02/hostreqs.xml @@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ <package-name>-dev. Be sure to install those if your distribution provides them. - Earlier versions of the listed software packages may work, but has not - been tested. + Earlier versions of the listed software packages may work, but have + not been tested. @@ -143,16 +143,21 @@ - Note that the symlinks mentioned above are required to build an LFS - system using the instructions contained within this book. Symlinks that - point to other software (such as dash, mawk, etc.) may work, but are not - tested or supported by the LFS development team, and may require either - deviation from the instructions or additional patches to some - packages. + + Note that the symlinks mentioned above are required to build an LFS + system using the instructions contained within this book. Symlinks that + point to other software (such as dash, mawk, etc.) may work, but are not + tested or supported by the LFS development team, and may require either + deviation from the instructions or additional patches to some + packages. + - - + + + To see whether your host system has all the appropriate versions, and the ability to compile programs, run the following: @@ -234,5 +239,5 @@ bash library-check.sh or all absent, but not only one or two present. - + diff --git a/chapter02/introduction.xml b/chapter02/introduction.xml index 11e4e1883..007bdad8b 100644 --- a/chapter02/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter02/introduction.xml @@ -10,8 +10,9 @@ Introduction - In this chapter, the partition which will host the LFS system is - prepared. We will create the partition itself, create a file system - on it, and mount it. + In this chapter, the host tools needed for building LFS + are checked and, if necessary, installed. Then a partition which will + host the LFS system is prepared. We will create the partition + itself, create a file system on it, and mount it. diff --git a/prologue/preface.xml b/prologue/preface.xml index bd2139857..21317757f 100644 --- a/prologue/preface.xml +++ b/prologue/preface.xml @@ -17,7 +17,6 @@ -