Various minor text changes to both book and bootscripts.

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### BEGIN INIT INFO ### BEGIN INIT INFO
# Provides: sysctl # Provides: sysctl
# Required-Start: mountkernfs # Required-Start: mountvirtfs
# Should-Start: # Should-Start:
# Required-Stop: # Required-Stop:
# Should-Stop: # Should-Stop:

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<para>2012-05-05</para>
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<para>[bdubbs] - Various minor text changes to
both book and bootscripts.</para>
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<para>2012-05-01</para> <para>2012-05-01</para>
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<para>2012-04-29</para> <para>2012-04-29</para>
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process has been designed to minimize the risks for new readers and to provide process has been designed to minimize the risks for new readers and to provide
the most educational value at the same time.</para> the most educational value at the same time.</para>
<important> <note>
<para>Before continuing, be aware of the name of the working platform, <para>Before continuing, be aware of the name of the working platform,
often referred to as the target triplet. A simple way to determine the often referred to as the target triplet. A simple way to determine the
name of the target triplet is to run the <command>config.guess</command> name of the target triplet is to run the <command>config.guess</command>
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and noting the output. The authoritative reference covering all platforms and noting the output. The authoritative reference covering all platforms
is in the <filename>shlib-versions</filename> file in the root of the Glibc is in the <filename>shlib-versions</filename> file in the root of the Glibc
source tree.</para> source tree.</para>
</important> </note>
<para>Some key technical points of how the <xref <para>Some key technical points of how the <xref
linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> build method works:</para> linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> build method works:</para>

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<para>As a debugging convenience, the functions script also logs all output <para>As a debugging convenience, the functions script also logs all output
to <filename>/run/var/bootlog</filename>. Since the <filename to <filename>/run/var/bootlog</filename>. Since the <filename
class="directory">/run</filename> directory is a tmpfs, this file is not class="directory">/run</filename> directory is a tmpfs, this file is not
persistent across boots.</para> persistent across boots, however it is appended to the more permanent file
<filename>/var/log/boot.log</filename> at the end of the boot process.</para>
</sect2> </sect2>

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<!ENTITY version "SVN-20120501"> <!ENTITY version "SVN-20120505">
<!ENTITY releasedate "May 01, 2012"> <!ENTITY releasedate "May 05, 2012">
<!ENTITY copyrightdate "1999-2012"><!-- jhalfs needs a literal dash, not &ndash; --> <!ENTITY copyrightdate "1999-2012"><!-- jhalfs needs a literal dash, not &ndash; -->
<!ENTITY milestone "7.2"> <!ENTITY milestone "7.2">
<!ENTITY generic-version "development"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or "x.y[-pre{x}]" --> <!ENTITY generic-version "development"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or "x.y[-pre{x}]" -->

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<!ENTITY less-ch6-du "3.5 MB"> <!ENTITY less-ch6-du "3.5 MB">
<!ENTITY less-ch6-sbu "less than 0.1 SBU"> <!ENTITY less-ch6-sbu "less than 0.1 SBU">
<!ENTITY lfs-bootscripts-version "20120409"> <!-- Scripts depend on this format --> <!ENTITY lfs-bootscripts-version "20120505"> <!-- Scripts depend on this format -->
<!ENTITY lfs-bootscripts-size "BOOTSCRIPTS-SIZE KB"> <!-- Updated in Makefile --> <!ENTITY lfs-bootscripts-size "BOOTSCRIPTS-SIZE KB"> <!-- Updated in Makefile -->
<!ENTITY lfs-bootscripts-url "&downloads-root;lfs-bootscripts-&lfs-bootscripts-version;.tar.bz2"> <!ENTITY lfs-bootscripts-url "&downloads-root;lfs-bootscripts-&lfs-bootscripts-version;.tar.bz2">
<!ENTITY lfs-bootscripts-md5 "BOOTSCRIPTS-MD5SUM"> <!-- Updated in Makefile --> <!ENTITY lfs-bootscripts-md5 "BOOTSCRIPTS-MD5SUM"> <!-- Updated in Makefile -->