diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml
index 9e264c5aa..ec3c8b6e8 100644
--- a/chapter01/changelog.xml
+++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml
@@ -51,6 +51,10 @@
+August 15th, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 04 - Preparing a new
+partition: mentioned that a swap partition can be shared between the LFS
+and host systems, grammatic changes.
+
August 13th, 2002 [gerard]: Chapter 06: Removed the
--with-curses switch from the Bash installation as
it's unnecessary here.
diff --git a/chapter03/creatingpart.xml b/chapter03/creatingpart.xml
index 03fd29709..d8ebd0c22 100644
--- a/chapter03/creatingpart.xml
+++ b/chapter03/creatingpart.xml
@@ -2,36 +2,42 @@
Creating a new partition
-First, let's start with telling you that it is possible to build LFS
-on only one partition, which is where your original distribution is
-installed. This is not recommended if it is the first time you try LFS,
-but may be useful if you are short on disk space. If you feel brave, take
-a look at the Install LFS next to existing systems on the same
-partition hint at It is possible to build LFS on only one partition - the partition
+in which your original distribution is installed. While this is not
+recommended for your first LFS installation, it may be useful if you
+are short on disk space. If you feel brave, take a look at the
+Install LFS next to existing systems on the same
+partition hint at .
-Before we can build our new Linux system, we need to have an empty Linux
-partition on which we can build our new system. We recommend a partition size
-of around 1 GB. This gives enough space to store all the tarballs and
-to compile all packages without worrying about running out of the necessary
-temporary disk space. But you probably want more space than that if you
-plan to use the LFS system as your primary Linux system. If that's the
-case you'd want more space so you can install additional software. If a
-Linux Native partition is already available, this subsection can be
-skipped.
+Before we can build our new Linux system, we need an empty
+Linux partition where we can build it. We recommend a partition size
+of at least 1 GB. This provides enough space to store the tarballs and
+compile all of the packages. You will probably need more space if you
+intend to install additional software and use the LFS system as your
+primary Linux system. If a Linux Native partition is already available,
+this subsection can be skipped.
-The cfdisk program (or another fdisk like program you prefer) is
-to be started with the appropriate hard disk as the option (like /dev/hda
-if a new partition is to be created on the primary master IDE disk). It is
-used to create a Linux Native partition and to write the partition table.
-Please refer to the documentation that comes with your fdisk program of
-choice (the man pages are often a good place to start) and read the
-procedures about how to create a new Linux native partition and how to
-write the partition table.
+Since your system memory can only hold a limited amount of data
+at one time, we recommend that disk space be set aside for swap files.
+A swap file is a place where items in memory may be stored until they
+are called for. This disk space may be shared between your host system
+and your LFS system. If you already have a swap partition, then you
+probably don't need to create another one. Otherwise, you should create
+a swap partition via an fdisk program. Regardless, you need to remember
+the designation of the swap partition (such as hda2) as it will be needed
+when we create the /etc/fstab file.
-The new partition's designation should be remembered. It
-could be something like hda11. This newly created partition will be
-referred to as the LFS partition in this book.
+The cfdisk program (or another fdisk-like program) should be
+started with the appropriate hard disk as the argument (like /dev/hda
+if a new partition is to be created on the primary master IDE disk).
+Using this program, create a Linux Native partition. Please refer to
+the documentation of your fdisk program (the man pages are often a
+good place to start) for information about creating Linux native
+partitions and writing partition tables.
+
+The designation of your new partition should be remembered.
+It might be something similar to hda11. This newly created partition
+will be referred to as the LFS partition in this book.
-
diff --git a/index.xml b/index.xml
index fd3d13f46..0b3c7cf49 100644
--- a/index.xml
+++ b/index.xml
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
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