Grammar updates

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<title>Install all software as user root</title>
<para>
It's best if the user logs in as root or su's to root when installing these
files. That way he is assured that all files are owned by user and
It's best to log in as root or su's to root when installing the
packages. That way you are assured that all files are owned by user and
group root (and not owned by the userid of the non-root user), and if a
package wants to set special permissions, it can do so without problems
due to non-root access.
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anyway. Hundreds of people using LFS have done so without any problems
whatsoever, and we haven't encountered any bugs in the compile processes
that cause harm. So it's pretty safe (never can be 100% safe though, so
it's up to the user what he ends up doing).
it's up to you what you ends up doing).
</para>
</sect1>

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<para>
In the following chapters we will install all the software that belongs to
a basic Linux system. After a user is done with this chapter he has a
fully working Linux system. The remaining chapters deal with setting up
networking, creating the boot scripts and adding an entry to lilo.conf so
that the LFS system can be booted.
a basic Linux system. After you're done with this and the next chapter,
you'll have a fully working Linux system. The remaining chapters deal
with creating the boot scripts, making the LFS system bootable and
setting up basic networking.
</para>
<para>
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</para>
<para>
We're about to start with installing the first set of packages. These
packages will be, as previously explained, linked statically.
During the installation of various packages, you will more than likely see
all kinds of compiler warnings scrolling by on the screen. These are
normal and can be safely ignored. They are just that, warnings (mostly
about improper use of the C or C++ syntax, but not illegal use. It's just
that, often, C standards changed and packages still use the old standard
which is not a problem).
</para>
<para>
During the installation of various packages, the user will most likely see
compiler warnings scrolling by on the screen. These are normal and can
be safely ignored. They are just that, warnings (mostly about improper
use of the C or C++ syntax, but not illegal use. It's just that, often, C
standards changed and packages still use the old standard which is not a
problem).
</para>
<para>
Before we start, it should be made sure the LFS environment variable was
setup
if it was planned to be used, by running the following command:
Before we start, make sure the LFS environment variable is setup
properly if you decided to make use of it. Run the following:
</para>
<blockquote><literallayout>
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</literallayout></blockquote>
<para>
Check to make sure the output contains the correct directory to the LFS
partition's mount point (/mnt/lfs for example).
</para>
</sect1>

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</para>
<para>
Enter the following command to enter the chroot'ed environment. From
Enter the following commands to enter the chroot'ed environment. From
this point on there's no need to use the $LFS variable anymore, because
everything a user does will be restricted to the LFS partition (since / is
actually /mnt/lfs but the shell doesn't know that).
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Now that we are inside a chroot'ed environment, we can continue to
install all the basic system software. You have to make sure all the
following commands in this and following chapters are run from within the
chroot'ed environment. If you ever leave this environment for a reason
(say when rebooting or something) please remember to mount $LFS/proc
again like you just did and re-enter chroot before continuing with the
chroot'ed environment. If you ever leave this environment for any reason
(when rebooting for example) please remember to mount $LFS/proc
again and re-enter chroot before continuing with the
book.
</para>
<para>
Note that the bash prompt will contain "I have no name!". This is
Note that the bash prompt will contain "I have no name!" This is
normal because Glibc hasn't been installed yet.
</para>