Grammar fixes.

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<para>
We are going to build the LFS system by using an already installed Linux
distribution such as Debian, SuSe, Slackware, Mandrake, RedHat, etc. You
distribution such as Debian, SuSE, Slackware, Mandrake, RedHat, etc. You
don't need to have any kind of bootdisk. We will use an existing Linux
system as the base (since we need a compiler, linker, text editor and other
tools).
system as the base (since we need a compiler, linker, text editor, and
other tools).
</para>
<para>
If you don't have Linux installed yet, you won't be able to put this
book to use right away. I suggest you first install a Linux
distribution. It really doesn't matter which one you install. It also
doesn't need to be the latest version, though it shouldn't be a too old one.
doesn't need to be the latest version, though it shouldn't be too old.
If it is about a year old or newer it should do just fine. You will save
yourself a lot of trouble if your normal system uses glibc-2.1 or newer.
Libc5 isn't supported by this book, though it isn't impossible to use a

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<title>Book version</title>
<para>
This is LFS-BOOK-&type; version &version; version dated &releasedate;. If this
This is LFS-BOOK-&type; version &version; dated &releasedate;. If this
version is older than a month you definitely want to take a look at our
website and check if there is a newer version available for download.
</para>
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of December 19th, 2000. This list might not be accurate anymore. For
the latest info check our website at
<ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org">
http://www.linuxfromscratch.org</ulink>
http://www.linuxfromscratch.org</ulink>.
</para>
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