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Clarified verbiage here and there. Used the present perfect tense instead

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of the simple present to make the order of events clearer.
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chapter02/stages.xml
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<para>LFS is designed to be built in one session. That is, the
instructions assume that the system will not be shut down
during the process. That does not mean that the system has to
be done in one sitting. The issue is that certain procedures
have to be re-accomplished after a reboot if resuming LFS at
during the process. This does not mean that the system has to
be built in one sitting. The issue is that certain procedures
must be repeated after a reboot when resuming LFS at
different points.</para>
<sect2>
<title>Chapters&nbsp;1&ndash;4</title>
<para>These chapters are accomplished on the host system. When
restarting, be careful of the following:</para>
<para>These chapters run commands on the host system. When
restarting, be certain of one thing:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>Procedures done as the
<para>Procedures performed as the
<systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user after Section
2.4 need to have the LFS environment variable set
2.4 must have the LFS environment variable set
<emphasis>FOR THE ROOT USER</emphasis>.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
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<listitem>
<para>These two chapters <emphasis>must</emphasis> be done as user
<systemitem class="username">lfs</systemitem>.
A <command>su - lfs</command> command must be issued before any task in these
A <command>su - lfs</command> command must be issued before performing any task in these
chapters. If you don't do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the
host, and potentially rendering it unusable.</para>
</listitem>
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<listitem>
<para>The procedures in <xref linkend='ch-tools-generalinstructions'/>
are critical. If there is any
doubt about installing a package, ensure any previously expanded
tarballs are removed, then re-extract the package files, and complete all
doubt a package has been installed correctly, ensure the previously expanded
tarball has been removed, then re-extract the package, and complete all
the instructions in that section.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
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<listitem>
<para> When entering chroot, the LFS environment variable must be set
for <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>. The LFS
variable is not used after entering the chroot environment.</para>
variable is not used after the chroot environment has been entered.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>