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chapter01/changelog.xml
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<itemizedlist> <itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>Upgraded to: <listitem><para>Upgraded to:</para>
<itemizedlist> <itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>automake-1.7.6</para></listitem> <listitem><para>automake-1.7.6</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>bash-2.05b</para></listitem> <listitem><para>bash-2.05b</para></listitem>
@ -41,9 +41,9 @@
<listitem><para>util-linux-2.12</para></listitem> <listitem><para>util-linux-2.12</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>vim-6.2</para></listitem> <listitem><para>vim-6.2</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist> </itemizedlist>
</para></listitem> </listitem>
<listitem><para>Added: <listitem><para>Added:</para>
<itemizedlist> <itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>bash-2.05b-2.patch</para></listitem> <listitem><para>bash-2.05b-2.patch</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>bison-1.875-attribute.patch</para></listitem> <listitem><para>bison-1.875-attribute.patch</para></listitem>
@ -72,9 +72,9 @@
<listitem><para>tcl-8.4.4</para></listitem> <listitem><para>tcl-8.4.4</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>zlib-1.1.4-vsnprintf.patch</para></listitem> <listitem><para>zlib-1.1.4-vsnprintf.patch</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist> </itemizedlist>
</para></listitem> </listitem>
<listitem><para>Removed: <listitem><para>Removed:</para>
<itemizedlist> <itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>bin86-0.16.3</para></listitem> <listitem><para>bin86-0.16.3</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>fileutils-4.1</para></listitem> <listitem><para>fileutils-4.1</para></listitem>
@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
<listitem><para>textutils-2.1</para></listitem> <listitem><para>textutils-2.1</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>vim-6.1.patch</para></listitem> <listitem><para>vim-6.1.patch</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist> </itemizedlist>
</para></listitem> </listitem>
<listitem><para>October 8th, 2003 [alex]: Chapter 8 - Making bootable: Adapted <listitem><para>October 8th, 2003 [alex]: Chapter 8 - Making bootable: Adapted
the style of the screens, and reworded some paragraphs.</para></listitem> the style of the screens, and reworded some paragraphs.</para></listitem>

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chapter02/askforhelp.xml
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@ -69,14 +69,15 @@ make[1]: *** [all-recursive] Error 1
make[1]: Leaving directory `/lfs/tmp/make-3.79.1' make[1]: Leaving directory `/lfs/tmp/make-3.79.1'
make: *** [all-recursive-am] Error 2</screen> make: *** [all-recursive-am] Error 2</screen>
<para>In this case, many people just include the bottom section where it <para>In this case, many people just include the bottom section where it says</para>
says <screen>make [2]: *** [make] Error 1</screen> and onwards. This
isn't enough for us to diagnose the problem because it only tells us <screen>make [2]: *** [make] Error 1</screen>
that <emphasis>something</emphasis> went wrong, not
<emphasis>what</emphasis> went wrong. The whole section, as <para>and onwards. This isn't enough for us to diagnose the problem because it
in the example above, is what should be included to be helpful, because it only tells us that <emphasis>something</emphasis> went wrong, not
includes the command that was executed and the command's error <emphasis>what</emphasis> went wrong. The whole section, as in the example
message(s).</para> above, is what should be included to be helpful, because it includes the
command that was executed and the command's error message(s).</para>
<para>An excellent article on asking for help on the Internet in general <para>An excellent article on asking for help on the Internet in general
has been written by Eric S. Raymond. It is available online at <ulink has been written by Eric S. Raymond. It is available online at <ulink