Various text updates/typo fixes from Chris Staub. Fixes #2367.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@8839 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

appendices/dependencies.xml

@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@
         <segtitle>&testsuites;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Not run. Requires TCL installed on the final system</seg>
+          <seg>Not run. Requires Tcl installed on the final system</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@
         <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>Util-Linux</seg>
+          <seg>Util-linux-ng</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1063,7 +1063,7 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
           <seg>Bash, GRUB, Inetutils, Less, Procps, Psmisc, Readline, Texinfo,
-          Util-Linux, and Vim</seg>
+          Util-linux-ng, and Vim</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -1426,8 +1426,8 @@
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
-<!-- Begin Util-Linux dependency info -->
+<!-- Begin Util-linux-ng dependency info -->
-  <bridgehead renderas="sect2" id="util-linux-dep">Util-Linux</bridgehead>
+  <bridgehead renderas="sect2" id="util-linux-dep">Util-linux-ng</bridgehead>
 
       <segmentedlist>
         <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
@@ -1505,7 +1505,7 @@
         <segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
 
         <seglistitem>
-          <seg>File, Module-Init-Tools, Perl, and Util-Linux</seg>
+          <seg>File, Module-Init-Tools, Perl, and Util-linux-ng</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 

chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -40,6 +40,10 @@
     <listitem>
       <para>2009-03-12</para>
       <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[matthew] - Fix a few typos.  Thanks to Chris Staub for the report and
+          patch. Fixes <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;2367">#2367</ulink>.</para>
+        </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[matthew] - Reword the explanation of the Expect tests in Binutils'
           instructions to clarify what the expected test output is.  Thanks to Chris

chapter05/gawk.xml

@@ -53,9 +53,10 @@
       <varlistentry>
         <term><parameter>ac_cv_func_working_mktime=yes</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This parameter bypasses the search for mktime in configure
+          <para>This parameter bypasses the search for mktime in
-          and uses the version in glibc. This is necessary due to a change in
+          <command>configure</command> and uses the version in glibc. This is
-          gcc that has not been incorporated into this package yet.</para>
+          necessary due to a change in GCC that has not been incorporated into
+          this package yet.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
 

chapter05/glibc.xml

@@ -121,8 +121,8 @@ esac</userinput></screen>
         <listitem>
           <para>The build requires support for forced unwind, but because it is
           being cross compiled, it cannot auto detect it. Setting this variable
-          on the command line explicitly tells the configure script that support
+          on the command line explicitly tells the
-          is available.</para>
+          <command>configure</command> script that support is available.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
       <varlistentry>

chapter05/grep.xml

@@ -65,9 +65,9 @@
       <varlistentry>
         <term><parameter>--without-included-regex</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>The configure check for glibc's regex library is broken when
+          <para>The configure check for Glibc's regex library is broken when
-          building against glibc-2.8.  This switch forces the use of glibc's
+          building against Glibc-&glibc-version;.  This switch forces the use of
-          regex library.</para>
+          Glibc's regex library.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
     </variablelist>

chapter06/db.xml

@@ -96,8 +96,8 @@
 <screen><userinput remap="make">make</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>It is not possible to test the package meaningfully, because
-    that would involve building TCL bindings. TCL bindings cannot be
+    that would involve building Tcl bindings. Tcl bindings cannot be
-    built properly now because TCL is linked against Glibc in
+    built properly now because Tcl is linked against Glibc in
     <filename class="directory">/tools</filename>, not against Glibc in
     <filename class="directory">/usr</filename>.</para>
 

chapter06/gcc.xml

@@ -61,10 +61,10 @@
 esac</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>The <command>fixincludes</command> script is known to occasionally
-    erroneously attempt to &quot;fix&quot; the system headers installed so far. As
+    erroneously attempt to &quot;fix&quot; the system headers installed so far.
-    the headers installed by GCC-&gcc-version; and Glibc-&glibc-version; are known
+    As the headers up to this point are known to not require fixing,
-    to not require fixing, issue the following command to prevent the
+    issue the following command to prevent the <command>fixincludes</command>
-    <command>fixincludes</command> script from running:</para>
+    script from running:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i 's@\./fixinc\.sh@-c true@' gcc/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -82,8 +82,8 @@ cd ../gcc-build</userinput></screen>
     --enable-clocale=gnu --enable-languages=c,c++ \
     --disable-multilib --disable-bootstrap</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Note that for other languages, there are some prerequsites that
+    <para>Note that for other languages, there are some prerequisites that
-    are not available.  See the BLFS Book for instructions on how to
+    are not available. See the BLFS Book for instructions on how to
     build all the GCC supported languages.</para>
 
     <para>Compile the package:</para>

chapter06/grep.xml

@@ -59,9 +59,9 @@
       <varlistentry>
         <term><parameter>--without-included-regex</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>The configure check for glibc's regex library is broken when
+          <para>The configure check for Glibc's regex library is broken when
-          building against glibc-2.8.  This switch forces the use of glibc's
+          building against Glibc-&glibc-version;.  This switch forces the use
-          regex library.</para>
+          of Glibc's regex library.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
     </variablelist>

chapter06/inetutils.xml

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Inetutils</title>
 
-    <para>All programs that come with Inetutils will not be installed.
+    <para>Not all programs that come with Inetutils will be installed.
     However, the Inetutils build system will insist on installing all the
     man pages anyway. The following patch will correct this
     situation:</para>