From 1cb4a25b36d2c3fbe58aa4df4dd67159b1fc6da2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com>
Date: Fri, 23 Sep 2022 15:16:02 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Tweak English idiom in chapter 4.1 (Introduction)

---
 chapter04/introduction.xml | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/chapter04/introduction.xml b/chapter04/introduction.xml
index c54c67f8c..e2ef6f0ba 100644
--- a/chapter04/introduction.xml
+++ b/chapter04/introduction.xml
@@ -12,11 +12,11 @@
 
   <para>In this chapter, we will perform a few additional tasks to prepare
   for building the temporary system. We will create a set of directories in
-  <filename class="directory">$LFS</filename> for the installation of the
-  temporary tools, add an unprivileged user to reduce risk,
+  <filename class="directory">$LFS</filename> (in which we will install the
+  temporary tools), add an unprivileged user,
   and create an appropriate build environment for that user. We will also
-  explain the unit of time we use to measure how long LFS packages take to
-  build, or <quote>SBUs</quote>, and give some information about package
+  explain the units of time (<quote>SBUs</quote>) we use to measure how
+  long it takes to build LFS packages, and provide some information about package
   test suites.</para>
 
 </sect1>