From 1b737e6e23f3dcb44b789175270c6bd0bca0086c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ken Moffat <ken@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Mon, 8 May 2006 21:55:43 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Minor rewording, also removes unnecessary visible whitespace.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@7596 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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 chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml b/chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml
index 810783fd7..bdecc2c50 100644
--- a/chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml
+++ b/chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml
@@ -14,10 +14,11 @@
   The most widely-used system in the Linux world is the second extended file
   system (<systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem>), but with newer
   high-capacity hard disks, journaling file systems are becoming increasingly
-  popular. The third extended filesystem (<systemitem class="filesystem">ext3
-  </systemitem>) is a widely-used development of <systemitem class="filesystem">
-  ext2</systemitem> which adds a journal and is compatible with the E2fsprogs
-  utilities. We will create an <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem>
+  popular. The third extended filesystem (<systemitem
+  class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem>) is a widely used enhancement to
+  <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem>, which adds journalling
+  capabilities and is compatible with the E2fsprogs utilities.
+  We will create an <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem>
   file system. Build instructions for other file systems can be found at
   <ulink url="&blfs-root;view/svn/postlfs/filesystems.html"/>.</para>